This 436-Page Super Mario World Movie Script "Sucks," Screenwriter Admits

<< LINK REMOVED >> says in the article, says in the header. it's the guy that wrote Chronicle.

<< LINK REMOVED >> Why should you care? Well, only you can answer that question yourself unless there's someone pointing a gun at you to force you to care.

<< LINK REMOVED >> Filler, until the click bait gets posted

Just let them make the rest of the story because when daisy arrived at the end of the movie Daisy say: MARIO LUIGI i need your help and the movie stop there !!!!! It would be great !!!

<< LINK REMOVED >> If the guy's this bad at pacing, I doubt he's sticking to that rule, in fact most writers don't. It's just an old Hollywood studio thing. From a quick glance I'd say it's more like 20-30 seconds per page, excluding the torturous action sequences, they're all over the place.

Part of the problem is that every character points everything out, several times. He also has this weird, repeating shtick where characters argue over what to call other characters.

<< LINK REMOVED >> No, the problem is that they aren't adapting the right games. Certain genres (FPS, platform, fighting) just don't make for good storytelling because telling a story is not the primary focus. Strong characters were not the hallmark of the Resident Evil games, so of course that isn't a strength in the films. And Lara Croft is at her best when she's all alone scaling impossible obstacles. You can't make an entire movie out of that and expect to sell the idea to audiences, so what we got was something that didn't satisfy anyone.

If you want a good video-game movie, you need a strong story and characters out of the box. There are plenty of games that fill that bill, but which ones would benefit notably from a new canvas to tell their stories? Which ones already have epic musical scores to translate to film? And which ones have a popular, lasting following due to their inherent qualities? The list is pretty short, but the perfect video-game movie is out there for those with the vision to make it happen.

@4kgamer_lmxxx Doesn't have to be the case but yeah, I know...

<< LINK REMOVED >> Fan-fiction is usually classified as material written with a labor of love without a lot of writing skill to back it up. There's nothing wrong with writing about a universe and characters that you love, but your characterizations, pacing, and plot need to be as solid as any original piece of fiction for people to take it seriously. Pacing is one of the more difficult tricks for an amateur writer to nail down, so it's no surprise that this guy lost control of his narrative at age 19. Perhaps he should have written this monster as a novel first and then picked out the bits that fit best in a screenplay. Very different disciplines, those.