this my story not a game FF 7- 2: the sequel to FF 7 ch 1

FF 7- 2: the sequel to FF 7 ch 1

the begining

After the events with barret and the others cloud decides its time to start his own bussiness a weapon/material shop in sector 6. So he fights in a battle tournament in sector 5 to get the gil to start his shop with so he then ends up flying to the battle like it is nothing he then finds that seprioth is back and is in shock as he gets challenged by seprioth but no matter his shock he starts the fight.

sprioth battle

the first attack is seprioth he uses a summon he summons ifrit and puts clouds hp from 10000 to 8000. Cloud notices that he is more powerful than ever before. then could sees he has an lighting hand so uses watera on the lighting hand and it brings seprioth from 15000 to 10000 and he loses he arm and the power of lighting.but then he attcks with frizzia and it brings cloud from 8000 to just 4000. cloud then attcks with wateria on his left arm which is fire this brings seprioth from 10000 to just 8000 then seprioth then attacks with his sword and cloud goes from 4000 to 2000.then cloud summons his best summon the shiva sisters (real powerful summon in this game) then they attack taking seprioth from 8000 to 3000. seprioth then runs out of the battle. cloud still stuned that seprioth is not dead goes on with his buessiness he starts his shop.

ch 1 info

seprioth is on a weak level in this encounter he is just lv. 45 cause he has just returned from his and clouds last encounter cloud is on lv. 50 and equiped with a lot a magic material

notice:this is just chapter 1 of this story the next chapter will come on june 7th or 8th 2005 please rate this first chapter and give some sugesstion for chapter 2

that doesn't really work that story, nice try

FF 7- 2: the sequel to FF 7 ch 2

after cloud has worked his shop for a while one day seprioth returns to but this time he just drops something and leaves cloud examines in it is a not with a shrina stamp on it it read " shrina is back and this time the leader is seprioth and his army so if you want to destroy the new shrina then meet me a the sector 7 ruins"

signed barret

so cloud meets barret and they decide that they will need some help so they then set of in search of a new team to replace their old team members and they evntually dicover a time machine and decide to go in to the future and look for the members they soon discover cloud a good blitzball player and fighter so they ask him to join and cloud says he will and that he nows some other people that would be willing to help them also so they set off to find them.they then get but on the way they encount a battle with 5 electic lizad shaped horned robots and they battle long ang rigorously tell finallt after a while cloud and his party immerge victorous

note:the net chapter will be here in a about 3 days or so so expect it then and please if you have sugesions please post them for me

its sucha scattered story, no flow to it at all, and the plot insane, it doesn't work at all
serioulsy, its cool you're tryin to make a fan fiction, but, you should really think more about this and work on it alot more before you keep goin with it, and practice up on you're writing skills, cause it might seem right to you i know, but the stry itself in the writing has zero flow to it
FenrirMM

One hint to the writer of the story please do not make an entire paragraph one sentence. just my two cents

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"]its sucha scattered story, no flow to it at all, and the plot insane, it doesn't work at all
serioulsy, its cool you're tryin to make a fan fiction, but, you should really think more about this and work on it alot more before you keep goin with it, and practice up on you're writing skills, cause it might seem right to you i know, but the stry itself in the writing has zero flow to it
mgatson

One hint to the writer of the story please do not make an entire paragraph one sentence. just my two cents

you don't want me to rate that, you REALLY don't want me to rate that................FenrirMM

yeh man true, but i aint gonna say anything offensive coz thats just tight

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"]you don't want me to rate that, you REALLY don't want me to rate that................storm1110

yeh man true, but i aint gonna say anything offensive coz thats just tight

[QUOTE="storm1110"]

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"]you don't want me to rate that, you REALLY don't want me to rate that................FenrirMM

yeh man true, but i aint gonna say anything offensive coz thats just tight

it means nasty and unfair

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"][QUOTE="storm1110"]

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"]you don't want me to rate that, you REALLY don't want me to rate that................storm1110

yeh man true, but i aint gonna say anything offensive coz thats just tight

it means nasty and unfair

oh lol i was confused too, here it means cool

[QUOTE="storm1110"][QUOTE="FenrirMM"][QUOTE="storm1110"]

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"]you don't want me to rate that, you REALLY don't want me to rate that................mgatson

yeh man true, but i aint gonna say anything offensive coz thats just tight

it means nasty and unfair

oh lol i was confused too, here it means cool

yeh it does here but it depends on context

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"][QUOTE="storm1110"]

[QUOTE="FenrirMM"]you don't want me to rate that, you REALLY don't want me to rate that................storm1110

yeh man true, but i aint gonna say anything offensive coz thats just tight

it means nasty and unfair