The Legend of Mario: Twilight Peach

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#1 darklynx13
Member since 2007 • 51 Posts

Just wanted to know what you guys think about my box, it's for a competion on vgboxart.comanyways enjoy!

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#2 ASK_Story
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Not bad. But you should render in some of Link's hair so that it will look less cropped. Right now it looks like Link is wearing Mario's mask.

ANd also, adjust thesaturation a bit. Link's art style isn't matching to well with Mario's cartoony face.

ANd I suggest you put Peach's face in a hood on the top corner if you can. Render it a blue so it will give that Bowser contrast on the other corner.

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#3 SemiMaster
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Not bad. But you should render in some of Link's hair so that it will look less cropped. Right now it looks like Link is wearing Mario's mask.

ANd also, adjust thesaturation a bit. Link's art style isn't matching to well with Mario's cartoony face.

ANd I suggest you put Peach's face in a hood on the top corner if you can. Render it a blue so it will give that Bowser contrast on the other corner.

ASK_Story

Also, it might be cool to replace the wolf form in the moon with like... Luigi or something, maybe Wario.

But those are great suggestions you got from ASK_Story as it is at least from an technical artistic standpoint.

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#4 Super-Penguin
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wow that's awesome you should definitally win