Anyone care to read a short short story I wrote a few years ago?

This is a short short story I wrote for a friend of mine a few years ago when I was about 17 years old. He was in a creative writing class and needed some help. I sort of did his homework for him but I volunteered because I enjoy writing and It's something I want to pursue, professionally or as a hobby. The subject matter had to ceter around a lottery ticket of some kind, but other than that I was free to write anything that came to mind. It is quite dark to say the least. I was sort of depressed at the time of writing it.

Hope you like it.

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Wow that's crazy! Really well written and pretty interesting

wow. i thought that i would skim through without caring, but i was drawn in. good job.

Really nice, looks like you put some thought into it!

I like it!

Thanks for the good feedback guys! :)

That was great, short but sweet :P