Confined in a town housing

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#1 CrimsonSilver
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Okay, for some of you who know me from the topic strange going ons in my dorm school, it may be difficult for you to believe the story I am about to tell now.

First, let me start off by saying I do not live in Georgia, and I am not from New York. I actually was born in Philadelphia, but was in GB until my 19th birthday. My father, who resides in Philadelphia, called me back to come live with him, and help with his business. As I graduated, and didn't plan in pursuing any further education, I left for Philadelphia last December. As soon as I arrived, my father placed me in remote town housing. Everything was fine until he told me that I could not go out of the town housing area, and had to make a grocery list for stuff I wanted (then he could get someone to shop for me). He refused to tell me why I should stay confined in the neighborhood, and refused to get me a car. For 20 days, he didn't contact me. Out of curiosity, I decided to take a walk outside of the neighborhood, but realized that the outside of the neighborhood was all around wooded area (covered the entire surrounding of the neighborhood). I came back inside, and immediately he called me and scolded at me for trying to go outside. I asked him about the reason I came here, and my job. He told me that he needed to sort things out. This was in January, and it's March now, and I haven't heard from him since. Also, it should be noted that the people in this neighborhood are almost never seen, except when I knock on their doors...They are all very unfriendly, and won't talk to me about anything. I really feel constrained and helpless. I probably spent so much time on GS out of my boredom...but now I feel that something is seriously wrong.

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#2 Cerussite
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You have contact with the outside world yet you haven't called the police yet?

This is BS.

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#3 pintabear49blue
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You lost my trust , kid.
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Yeah, rules are meant to be broken
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Please don't be an advertisement for the webcomic. >__>
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#6 CrimsonSilver
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You have contact with the outside world yet you haven't called the police yet?

This is BS.

Cerussite

umm do i wanna call the police onmy dad?

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#7 Travo_basic
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You say "in Philadelphia is where you were born and raised."
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#8 Ayla0
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Sounds creepy! Maybe you're part of an experiment =o
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#9 Cerussite
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[QUOTE="Cerussite"]

You have contact with the outside world yet you haven't called the police yet?

This is BS.

CrimsonSilver

umm do i wanna call the police onmy dad?

Where did I say you should call the police on your dad?

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[QUOTE="Cerussite"]

You have contact with the outside world yet you haven't called the police yet?

This is BS.

CrimsonSilver

umm do i wanna call the police onmy dad?

at this point, yes. normal people do.

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#11 CrimsonSilver
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You say "in Philadelphia is where you were born and raised."Travo_basic

I wasn't raised there I was raised in GB

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#12 CrimsonSilver
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[QUOTE="CrimsonSilver"][QUOTE="Cerussite"]

You have contact with the outside world yet you haven't called the police yet?

This is BS.

SpootyHead

umm do i wanna call the police onmy dad?

at this point, yes. normal people do.

Yeah normal people do...I guess I am not normal...I keep having urges, but I resist them...

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#13 SpootyHead
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[QUOTE="SpootyHead"][QUOTE="CrimsonSilver"][QUOTE="Cerussite"]

You have contact with the outside world yet you haven't called the police yet?

This is BS.

CrimsonSilver

umm do i wanna call the police onmy dad?

at this point, yes. normal people do.

Yeah normal people do...I guess I am not normal...I keep having urges, but I resist them...

Do you even know where you are, or is this like the beginning of some Silent Hill plot?

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#14 kadomony1988
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zzzzz...sounds like some wonky story...but ..if i see it on CNN or somethin ill believe u then..lulz
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#15 Ayla0
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I was sorta thinking about Silent Hill also when I read this, hehehe.
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#16 zero9167
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stop making up stories
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#17 CrimsonSilver
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[QUOTE="CrimsonSilver"][QUOTE="SpootyHead"][QUOTE="CrimsonSilver"][QUOTE="Cerussite"]

You have contact with the outside world yet you haven't called the police yet?

This is BS.

SpootyHead

umm do i wanna call the police onmy dad?

at this point, yes. normal people do.

Yeah normal people do...I guess I am not normal...I keep having urges, but I resist them...

Do you even know where you are, or is this like the beginning of some Silent Hill plot?

I know I am in Philadelphia, but other than that not really.

I am going to try to ask around a bit more, and try calling my dad again...if that doesn't work police it is...

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#18 Travo_basic
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You say "in Philadelphia is where you were born and raised."Travo_basic
:lol: Sorry, it was an attempt at a Bel-Air joke.
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#19 Fire_Ants
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To early for another pretend thread :|
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#20 CrimzonTide
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To early for another pretend thread :|Fire_Ants
And he didn't even get mauled by a bear in the end...
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#21 CrimsonSilver
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To early for another pretend thread :|Fire_Ants

Yeah too early..I think so too...hmm...I had a whole cast ready for the youtube videos...

JK JK....

I'm pretty serious what do you think I should do, it's not like I'm in danger, but I feel like I am going crazy.

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#22 gobo212
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Burn it to the ground.
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#23 CrimsonSilver
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[QUOTE="Fire_Ants"]To early for another pretend thread :|CrimzonTide
And he didn't even get mauled by a bear in the end...

I did maul myself with a bear at the end!

or was it the uncle?

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#24 Andrew_Xavier
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The problem is, your ideas aren't very innovative, the concepts in your last story "strange goings on in my dorm" where from a movie, and this concept of a lost town with full monitoring and all that jazz is from a movie, you do a decent job of setting plot, but, it's a bit rushed, I suggest you work on a longer story with more interest to it, and make sure it's not directly from a movie, anyways, keep up the good effort.

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#25 CrimsonSilver
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...I'm like the boy who cried wolf..:(
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#26 pintabear49blue
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...I'm like the boy who cried wolf..:(CrimsonSilver

Too bad , kid. Too ******* bad.

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#27 CrimsonSilver
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Hey! Hey! Hey! I am not a kid! :(
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#28 pintabear49blue
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Hey! Hey! Hey! I am not a kid! :(CrimsonSilver

19 is a young age.

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#30 Venus2Angel
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Lolz you're still doing this..:)
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#31 pintabear49blue
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Lolz you're still doing this..:)Venus2Angel

Oh silly , crimson.

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#32 ayanami_rei
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Have you...you know...tried calling your dad?
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#33 pintabear49blue
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Have you...you know...tried calling your dad?ayanami_rei

He is lying.

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#34 ayanami_rei
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[QUOTE="ayanami_rei"]Have you...you know...tried calling your dad?pintabear49blue

He is lying.

>_> I never said I believed him. If he hasn't heard from his dad, he could always call him. After all, that would be an ideal option when wondering why his father hasn't contacted him.

Then again, >_> maybe he's not that bright, seeing as how he got himself stuck in this mess if what he says is true.

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#35 pintabear49blue
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[QUOTE="pintabear49blue"]

[QUOTE="ayanami_rei"]Have you...you know...tried calling your dad?ayanami_rei

He is lying.

>_> I never said I believed him. If he hasn't heard from his dad, he could always call him. After all, that would be an ideal option when wondering why his father hasn't contacted him.

Then again, >_> maybe he's not that bright, seeing as how he got himself stuck in this mess if what he says is true.

Did you see the last topic with the cult that was out to get him?

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#36 ayanami_rei
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Did you see the last topic with the cult that was out to get him?

pintabear49blue
Nah. I think I lookd at the title and just that it was going to be too stupid to even click on.
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#37 CrimsonSilver
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[QUOTE="pintabear49blue"]

Did you see the last topic with the cult that was out to get him?

ayanami_rei

Nah. I think I lookd at the title and just that it was going to be too stupid to even click on.

you people are all out to get me.. I noe it