From a person whos like's rap perspective

IDK if I worded that right lol but anyway This is some of my music Its hip hop-ish? :P Can I get some feedback On it? :D Be honest and yes I know I need to say it louder so Just read the lyrics too :) My brother say's I could be in Young Money (lil waynes Label) but hes my brother so he has to say that lol :P

http://www.youtube.com/user/Darthvader9669Only Two vids though :/ just want some feedback Feel free to post your music as well :D

woah just noticed alot of smileys lol

I'd Rather not be honest, but good luck. I rap too, maybe I should post some stuff.

I'd Rather not be honest, but good luck. I rap too, maybe I should post some stuff.

Assassin1349

hehe this was funny

It's decent.

i cant hear u. :( and as of now no. cuz i cant hear u. ( :lol: ) thats the nicest thing ima say. but that doesnt mean i got a lot of bad things to say.

its a mistery u will never no

I'll try to say this in the kindest way I can...

That was whack.

I'll try to say this in the kindest way I can...

That was whack.

Guntrix7

Am I the only one that thinks its good lol :P hmm mayb I should be a ghost writer

I'm gonna be honest. That was good,decent good. I'm an experienced rapper(not pro) but u know,on the down low. Some Advice: Don't use too many curse words cuz that will kill it. Try to keep it on the same subject Invented Sex was actually kinda good. Awesome.aerial6790

hehe thanks 4 the advice :D

[QUOTE="aerial6790"]I'm gonna be honest. That was good,decent good. I'm an experienced rapper(not pro) but u know,on the down low. Some Advice: Don't use too many curse words cuz that will kill it. Try to keep it on the same subject Invented Sex was actually kinda good. Awesome.jherbach1222

hehe thanks 4 the advice :D

You sound too much like Lil' Wayne and them. Do something original.dk00111

Yeah thats what my friends say.. I heard he steals lyrics though :o

[QUOTE="dk00111"]You sound too much like Lil' Wayne and them. Do something original.jherbach1222

Yeah thats what my friends say.. I heard he steals lyrics though :o

[QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

[QUOTE="aerial6790"]I'm gonna be honest. That was good,decent good. I'm an experienced rapper(not pro) but u know,on the down low. Some Advice: Don't use too many curse words cuz that will kill it. Try to keep it on the same subject Invented Sex was actually kinda good. Awesome.aerial6790

hehe thanks 4 the advice :D

Avatar without 3D must Of did it :lol:

[QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

[QUOTE="dk00111"]You sound too much like Lil' Wayne and them. Do something original.aerial6790

Yeah thats what my friends say.. I heard he steals lyrics though :o

thats so ridiculous And people says hes the Best rapper alive, I dont think he deserves it bc of that

to be honest for an amateur id rate you 5/10. really if wanna actually be considered original with your stuff is suggest you head in the completely opposite direction of Young Money. keep at it though.

[QUOTE="aerial6790"][QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

Yeah thats what my friends say.. I heard he steals lyrics though :o

jherbach1222

thats so ridiculous And people says hes the Best rapper alive, I dont think he deserves it bc of that

[QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

[QUOTE="aerial6790"] beats too.aerial6790

thats so ridiculous And people says hes the Best rapper alive, I dont think he deserves it bc of that

Hmm everyone always looks up to him as like the beast in rap music, I have yet to listen to any other song then "gimme the loot" I will look some of his stuff up though :D

[QUOTE="dk00111"]You sound too much like Lil' Wayne and them. Do something original.jherbach1222

Yeah thats what my friends say.. I heard he steals lyrics though :o

[QUOTE="aerial6790"][QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

thats so ridiculous And people says hes the Best rapper alive, I dont think he deserves it bc of that

jherbach1222

Hmm everyone always looks up to him as like the beast in rap music, I have yet to listen to any other song then "gimme the loot" I will look some of his stuff up though :D

[QUOTE="aerial6790"][QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

thats so ridiculous And people says hes the Best rapper alive, I dont think he deserves it bc of that

jherbach1222

Hmm everyone always looks up to him as like the beast in rap music, I have yet to listen to any other song then "gimme the loot" I will look some of his stuff up though :D

[QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

[QUOTE="aerial6790"] Listen to Biggie,now that's REAL music.aerial6790

Hmm everyone always looks up to him as like the beast in rap music, I have yet to listen to any other song then "gimme the loot" I will look some of his stuff up though :D

[QUOTE="jherbach1222"]

[QUOTE="aerial6790"] Listen to Biggie,now that's REAL music.Blitz_Nemesis

Hmm everyone always looks up to him as like the beast in rap music, I have yet to listen to any other song then "gimme the loot" I will look some of his stuff up though :D

the come up was cool but I dont like that style Im just stupid wild :D That was good though