[QUOTE="TheAbbeFaria"][QUOTE="DEVILinIRON"]To suggest that McCarthy's writing is poorly thought out strikes me as a bit uncouth. After all, this is the same author who wrote No Country For Old Men and All The Pretty Horses. In The Road, the time and place in which he writes about is practically barren. It's only fitting that the style in which he writes about such a time and place should pursue a minimalist perspective.
DEVILinIRON
McCarthy's writing in the Road is very poor as far as I'm concerned, but I can't say the same for the rest of his works, since I haven't read any of them yet. However, the style of writing in the Road isn't the same style employed in his other books either. Furthermore, I think his particular use of minimalism lacks thought, and it seems as though he is just writing whatever comes to mind. It's my suspicion that his prestige as a writer over-shadowed this book's lack of quality writing because I don't think any other writer would have been able to get a book like this published.
I mean just look at these lines on page 182
"Do you think there are ships out there"?
"I don't think so"
"They wouldn't be able to see very far"
"No. They wouldn't."
I can see how the author may want to create a sense of emptiness in the writing to reflect the emptiness of the world, but this just lacks character and voice. It lacks thought.
Er. What would have made more sense in your opinion regarding this dialogue? What more do you want? I just don't get your stance on this at all. The dialogue is minimal to illustrate the loss of hope in the main character. The main character practically has no voice because of all the loss he has experienced. Instead most of the dialogue is usually initiated by the son. The son has experienced less tragedy and is naive. So you would have preferred a more thoughtful main character, is that it? But then that would have changed the entire tone of the story, don't you think? Sometimes there are no words to express how one is feeling. One just is. That was the main character in my eyes. Also I think McCarthy's style IS the same. It's just a a little bit more minimalist in this book compared to the others.My stance isn't all that complicated. Simply put, there isn't much to the dialog, which is quite evident in the few lines I provided, and the writing lacks depth, which is also portrayed in the dialog. I have no problem with minimalist writing, but I just don't think he did a very good job with it. Many lines of writing are simply amateurish, in that diction and syntax are what I would expect from an unknown, not a successful, published author. Also, I've heard much about the uniqueness of his writing in the Road, such that it is very different compared to his style in his other books. I haven't read his other books, but that's what I've heard.
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