Hey OT, can you give me some tips on some pictures I drew??

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#1 1aday
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First of all, I'm enjoying my first day on these forums! :) Here are some pictures I drew, I hope you can give me some tips on how to better myself! Here's from a few years ago when I first started :P http://i.imgur.com/35QRD.jpg and a newer one http://i.imgur.com/OCDDo.jpg I have some more, but they're not uploaded yet...if you guys like them maybe I can post some more! :)
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#2 mrmusicman247
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I don't...I don't see the pictures...Or is my schizophrenia finally kicking in?
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#3 funsohng
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TC's pics.
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#4 1aday
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[QUOTE="funsohng"]TC's pics.

thank you! I wasn't sure why they didn't know in my post...
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#5 Blue-Sky
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[QUOTE="funsohng"]TC's pics. 1aday
thank you! I wasn't sure why they didn't know in my post...

Because you didn't insert a direct hosting link in the inset/edit image button (next to the smily face)

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#6 EJ902
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The hands in the first one look a bit odd. I've always found fingers especially fiddly to draw and the only way to improve is to keep trying, no special tips I could suggest. The darker fine-line pen on the hair and hood looks good, maybe you should add it to other parts of the drawing. The second one is pretty damn good and there's nothing I can suggest that you could add to it. Nice work!
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#7 JigglyWiggly_
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Needs more cowbell
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#8 Bikouchu35
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I like the second pict. I used to draw a bit here and there at my art class in HS, and Imo the best way to improve is to see the original art more ex:watch the cartoon/anime more that you want to draw so you get a better picture in your head with the proportions. Get darker lead too that helps with contrast and brings it to life.

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#9 1aday
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Thank you all so far :)
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#10 BMD004
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Don't use such hard outlines.

You should start with outlines, but everything in the end should be soft:

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#11 VensInferno
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Alright lets see.

The first one is un proportional but the anatomy seems ok. Arm length seems to be good. So yah :P I don't like to critique people's work because I believe everyones pieces are great if you put dedication. But if you want serious critiques, go to Conceptart.org. Pros go to the site then chat and show off there work(totally different from DeviantArt)

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#12 BMD004
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I got the book "Draw Real People!" by Lee Hammond when I was younger and liked to draw... it helped me greatly. Even if realistic drawing isn't your style, you can still apply the same principles to match your style. It's a fantastic book. Here are some pictures from inside:

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#13 Optical_Order
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More boobs.

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I got the book "Draw Real People!" by Lee Hammond when I was younger and liked to draw... it helped me greatly. Even if realistic drawing isn't your style, you can still apply the same principles to match your style. It's a fantastic book. Here are some pictures from inside

BMD004

That is true. Lots of people prefer anime over realism but to draw anime you need to know realism. TC, I have some great book recommendations that I have used for my art studies.

And practically every Andrew Loomis book.

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Use more references and spend more time on your work.

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I got the book "Draw Real People!" by Lee Hammond when I was younger and liked to draw... it helped me greatly. Even if realistic drawing isn't your style, you can still apply the same principles to match your style. It's a fantastic book. Here are some pictures from inside:

BMD004

Thanks for showing that. I also think it's really good that you showed the "before and after" pictures. That shows that with a lot of practice, it doesn't take long for one's work to improve significantly.

I think there's this sort of notion out there that drawing is something that "you can either do, or you'll never be able to do", and I think that discourages a lot of people from even trying.

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#17 BMD004
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[QUOTE="BMD004"]

I got the book "Draw Real People!" by Lee Hammond when I was younger and liked to draw... it helped me greatly. Even if realistic drawing isn't your style, you can still apply the same principles to match your style. It's a fantastic book. Here are some pictures from inside:

MrGeezer

Thanks for showing that. I also think it's really good that you showed the "before and after" pictures. That shows that with a lot of practice, it doesn't take long for one's work to improve significantly.

I think there's this sort of notion out there that drawing is something that "you can either do, or you'll never be able to do", and I think that discourages a lot of people from even trying.

And it's 100% realistic that you can improve that much in not too much time. I drew a picture of George Washington that looked similar to the first Tom Cruise picture... then I read the book and practiced, and drew George Washington again, and it looks almost as good as the second Tom Cruise photo. Even I was surprised at how realistic it looked and I couldn't stop looking at it. I couldn't believe I actually drew that.
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#18 Bloodseeker23
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The 2nd one is much better than the first..
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It needs darker outline for the first pic and the outlines should be less crooked, the second pic is much better, but try to make the colours more refined.

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#20 VensInferno
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It needs darker outline for the first pic and the outlines should be less crooked, the second pic is much better, but try to make the colours more refined.

stevoqwerty

You sure must try this site . I love that Witcher 2 piece.

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#21 stevoqwerty
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[QUOTE="stevoqwerty"]

It needs darker outline for the first pic and the outlines should be less crooked, the second pic is much better, but try to make the colours more refined.

VensInferno

You sure must try this site . I love that Witcher 2 piece.

Yea, I should, the artists on that site are amazing.

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#22 VensInferno
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[QUOTE="VensInferno"]

[QUOTE="stevoqwerty"]

It needs darker outline for the first pic and the outlines should be less crooked, the second pic is much better, but try to make the colours more refined.

stevoqwerty

You sure must try this site . I love that Witcher 2 piece.

Yea, I should, the artists on that site are amazing.

Hows your portfolio coming along?

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#23 stevoqwerty
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[QUOTE="stevoqwerty"]

[QUOTE="VensInferno"] You sure must try this site . I love that Witcher 2 piece.

VensInferno

Yea, I should, the artists on that site are amazing.

Hows your portfolio coming along?

You mean my Deviantart one? It's been good, every picture I post is getting better.