I made a Musical. Please watch it. I wrote it all myself!

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#1 darkhadow
Member since 2005 • 279 Posts

Please tell me what you think.

I think it turned out excellent, to be honest. I could be wrong though.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=etysYy3Bga8

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#2 ShadowTech_FTW
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... wow, i'm sorry i had to stop at 3:23.. the astronaut voice irks the crap outta me.. but i like where you wanna going with it... and anyone who takes the time to make something like that gets my respect..good work (from what i saw..but change that voice)

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#3 Ryder-11
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It's.....different.

I don't really like musicals though.

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#4 deactivated-57e5de5e137a4
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Haha, I skipped parts of it, but the computer singing to Bill was very funny.
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#5 darkhadow
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The voices are supposed to be kind of strange. It's partly humorous, but it does explore some deep topics if you can understand the lyrics. Especially in the middle.

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#6 Tauruslink
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I'm sorry but that was horrible.
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#7 SSWolfy88
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It could use ALOT more animation, too still...
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#8 KcurtorMas
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Well in all honesty, the first song was great and funny, as well as the voice. Reminds me of a mix of Napolean Dynamite and Patrick Star from Spongebob. The rest was interesting...but not as funny. I found the other voices to be a bit annoying. Tone it down a bit, with the same wierd dialogue...

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I liked the camerawork man. Good stuff.
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#10 darkhadow
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Well in all honesty, the first song was great and funny, as well as the voice. Reminds me of a mix of Napolean Dynamite and Patrick Star from Spongebob. The rest was interesting...but not as funny. I found the other voices to be a bit annoying. Tone it down a bit, with the same wierd dialogue...

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Eh heh...the first song was supposed to be the worst one because Bill was just trying singing for the first time. I didn't try to put that many jokes into that one either. Most of the songs are admittably very hard to understand though, so lots of the jokes in the lyrics are probably being missed. I should really add subtitles.
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#11 VivaKatimari
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it was meh. at times i smiled but bills voice pissed me off.

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#12 darkhadow
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it was meh. at times i smiled but bills voice pissed me off.

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That's dissapointing. I put alot of effort into making Bill's voice. I thought that would be the main comedic aspect.
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#13 VivaKatimari
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[QUOTE="VivaKatimari"]

it was meh. at times i smiled but bills voice pissed me off.

darkhadow

That's dissapointing. I put alot of effort into making Bill's voice. I thought that would be the main comedic aspect.

I can tell you put alot of effort in to his voice but i just like that kind of stuff. But thats just me.

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#14 Nerd_Man
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...Someone must have been very bored. :|:lol: