I need you opinion on this email to a girl

Ok, I screwed up with this girl I like, and I wanted to appologize, so I decided to email her and hope for a good reply. But, I need to know, is this good. BTW she is like the sincere type and all that, cool, but not wild lol. Ladies, your opinion is the important ones, I need to see a girl's perspective. Ad please, can we be mature about this, no annoying immature stuff please. Herei t is:

Ok, listen, I am really sorry for what happened in the past. I know that I made a big mistake, and really regret it, and I know you probably hate me. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize. I want you to know that I am realy sorry, but I am hoping that you can forgive me.I seriously am sorry, and I was hoping that you can forget what happened last year. Please, if youdon't mind, can you please just keep this between us, and like don't tell anyone, you could go ahead and tell them, but if you don't mind don't tell them.If you want me to explain what exactly happened last year with that thing z told you, just let me know. I also understand if you don't wanna talk, or if you block me, but at least you know that I am sorry, for what I've done, and I hope that it won't happen again.

haha no offence but its really bad, its like theres notihing 'special' about the letter, you just keep saying sorry sorry sorry please please please, be creative.wizard90

Lol, well, cuz my friend knows her, so I asked her like stuff she knows aboutt he girl, and she said thato ne thing is that ifyou ever apologize, make it clear lol, thats why, BTw Chamillionaire rules:D

I am very sorry for what happened. I know I made a big mistake, and really regret it. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize and I am hoping that with time you can forgive me.If you want an explanation, just let me know. I also will understand if you don't wanna talk. I promise that it won't happen again and ask only that you keep this between just the two of us.

Thanks for listening.

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I amvery sorry for what happened. I know I made a big mistake, and really regret it. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize andI am hoping that with time you can forgive me.If you wantan explanation, just let me know. I also will understand if you don't wanna talk. I promise that it won't happen again and ask only that you keep this between just the two of us.

Thanks for listening.

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LJS9502_basic

Thx soooooooo much dude, thats way better than mine, honestly thx man:D

I amvery sorry for what happened. I know I made a big mistake, and really regret it. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize andI am hoping that with time you can forgive me.If you wantan explanation, just let me know. I also will understand if you don't wanna talk. I promise that it won't happen again and ask only that you keep this between just the two of us.

Thanks for listening.

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LJS9502_basic

this is better, but an apology always works better face to face

[QUOTE="LJS9502_basic"]

I amvery sorry for what happened. I know I made a big mistake, and really regret it. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize andI am hoping that with time you can forgive me.If you wantan explanation, just let me know. I also will understand if you don't wanna talk. I promise that it won't happen again and ask only that you keep this between just the two of us.

Thanks for listening.

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markop2003

this is better, but an apology always works better face to face

I know an apology works better face to face, but the thing is, I can't do that, Im sendign this email, thinking that she either hates me or likes me, and if talked to herface to face, I dunno man, but I found it like more comfortable for me to send an email, then meet her on monday and talk to her.

don't go e-mail.

do it in personal and up front. show yourself.

edit: if you can, that is. :p

don't go e-mail.

do it in personal and up front. show yourself.

rowzzr

Pst.....while I never sent an email...I have used cards. Gives you that edge for the face to face meeting.;)

it seems like you're apologizing to save your arse about someting as opposed to being remorsefull......if you don;t mean it don;t say it....Omni-Slash

It is sincere, but lemme ask this to people, did you ever love someone, not like. You know how you are nervous and all that, this is the case right here, its hard for me to just talk as if she was my brother or something, its hard, but Iunno if thats just me lol

it seems like you're apologizing to save your arse about someting as opposed to being remorsefull......if you don;t mean it don;t say it....Omni-Slash

When it comes down to it...isn't that what all apologies are?

It is sincere, but lemme ask this to people, did you ever love someone, not like. You know how you are nervous and all that, this is the case right here, its hard for me to just talk as if she was my brother or something, its hard, but Iunno if thats just me lol

mohammad93

[QUOTE="mohammad93"]

It is sincere, but lemme ask this to people, did you ever love someone, not like. You know how you are nervous and all that, this is the case right here, its hard for me to just talk as if she was my brother or something, its hard, but Iunno if thats just me lol

Omni-Slash

Fine, I know how she will love me back, I will say this

"I am a good man"

"You a good lady"

Im not sure if youll notice what these wordsare from, but it was one of them ost hilariousparts of the movie:P

I am very sorry for what happened. I know I made a big mistake, and really regret it. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize and I am hoping that with time you can forgive me.If you want an explanation, just let me know. I also will understand if you don't wanna talk. I promise that it won't happen again and ask only that you keep this between just the two of us.

Thanks for listening.

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LJS9502_basic

A vast improvement. I suggest the TC uses this.

[QUOTE="LJS9502_basic"]

I am very sorry for what happened. I know I made a big mistake, and really regret it. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize and I am hoping that with time you can forgive me.If you want an explanation, just let me know. I also will understand if you don't wanna talk. I promise that it won't happen again and ask only that you keep this between just the two of us.

Thanks for listening.

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luke1889

A vast improvement. I suggest the TC uses this.

Yea, I will:D

It sounds like you don't want her to tell people about what happened, instead of you sounding sorry. And don't write "I hope you can forget about it" that just makes it sound like you don't care about what happened. It's also too repetitive.DrSponge

Yea, I fixed that, and I'll post her reply

too much begging, and too repetativehormagaunt

Indeed.

you don't apoligize via Mail ?whoody12

Who, me or that other guy

Take out the part about not telling anyone. That makes it sound like the objective of your email isn't to apologize, and you just want her to be quiet about the whole thing.msudude211

Yeah, exactly what I was thinking

don't go e-mail.

do it in personal and up front. show yourself.

edit: if you can, that is. :p

rowzzr

just go up to her, hug her somewhat tightly and softly say "I'm sorry". Look into her eyes and smile and see what she does........

[QUOTE="rowzzr"]

don't go e-mail.

do it in personal and up front. show yourself.

edit: if you can, that is. :p

firebreathing

just go up to her, hug her somewhat tightly and softly say "I'm sorry". Look into her eyes and smile and see what she does........

I wish I cando that, but one problem, if that isn't what she wants me 2 do, she gots cousins big scary cousins lmao

Tell us what you did. Don't worry, you're anonymous here. And then I'll tell you whether I'd forgive you if I were her.Blaze787

Ok, this is the problem:

Me and the girl were friends, just friends, and then I started to rush things too fast, and I ended up having a messenger tell her that I like her, and ever since then, she doesnt talk to me as much as she used to, I send the email, but now I'm waiting for a reply, that is if she replies

[QUOTE="Blaze787"]Tell us what you did. Don't worry, you're anonymous here. And then I'll tell you whether I'd forgive you if I were her.mohammad93

Ok, this is the problem:

Me and the girl were friends, just friends, and then I started to rush things too fast, and I ended up having a messenger tell her that I like her, and ever since then, she doesnt talk to me as much as she used to, I send the email, but now I'm waiting for a reply, that is if she replies

Is that it? :| All that apologizing because you done that? sheesh

Dude what you do?edd678

I just posted it, I rushe the relation basically

If you two were just friends, how did you rush it? Did you make a move and she didn't like that? Were you two really going out? or just really good friends and you took it the wrong way. It doesn't sound like there was a relationship my friend.

Not to sound mean, but it sounds like you might have just been rejected. Why are you apologizing for how you feel? You make it sound like you killed her dog or something.

You sound young, move on.

And DON'T SEND HER ANYTHING!

If you two were just friends, how did you rush it? Did you make a move and she didn't like that? Were you two really going out? or just really good friends and you took it the wrong way. It doesn't sound like there was a relationship my friend.

Not to sound mean, but it sounds like you might have just been rejected. Why are you apologizing for how you feel? You make it sound like you killed her dog or something.

You sound young, move on.

And DON'T SEND HER ANYTHING!

InterpolWilco

Well, I can't really explain it, but she liekd me as well, but the thing is, we both didn't know how to feel, but I wanted her 2 be my gf too fast, which made her get angry, but I hope this email will fix things

It doesn't sound like you've done anything wrong, unless you were pestering her to make out with you or something. Just say that you're sorry you took things too fast, and that you would really like to continue being friends with her.

[QUOTE="Blaze787"]Tell us what you did. Don't worry, you're anonymous here. And then I'll tell you whether I'd forgive you if I were her.mohammad93

Ok, this is the problem:

Me and the girl were friends, just friends, and then I started to rush things too fast, and I ended up having a messenger tell her that I like her, and ever since then, she doesnt talk to me as much as she used to, I send the email, but now I'm waiting for a reply, that is if she replies

Never do that through another. Ever.

It doesn't sound like you've done anything wrong, unless you were pestering her to make out with you or something. Just say that you're sorry you took things too fast, and that you would really like to continue being friends with her.

Blaze787

Thx, now I am anxiuosly waitingfor a reply:D

[QUOTE="mohammad93"]

[QUOTE="Blaze787"]Tell us what you did. Don't worry, you're anonymous here. And then I'll tell you whether I'd forgive you if I were her.Quick-Time

Ok, this is the problem:

Me and the girl were friends, just friends, and then I started to rush things too fast, and I ended up having a messenger tell her that I like her, and ever since then, she doesnt talk to me as much as she used to, I send the email, but now I'm waiting for a reply, that is if she replies

Never do that through another. Ever.

Yes, I know, Thx, that is exactly the reason for my email. Hope it works

Ok, I screwed up with this girl I like, and I wanted to appologize, so I decided to email her and hope for a good reply. But, I need to know, is this good. BTW she is like the sincere type and all that, cool, but not wild lol. Ladies, your opinion is the important ones, I need to see a girl's perspective. Ad please, can we be mature about this, no annoying immature stuff please. Herei t is:

Ok, listen, I am really sorry for what happened in the past. I know that I made a big mistake, and really regret it, and I know you probably hate me. I know that I am the last person you want to receive an email from, but I thought that I should apologize. I want you to know that I am realy sorry, but I am hoping that you can forgive me.I seriously am sorry, and I was hoping that you can forget what happened last year. Please, if youdon't mind, can you please just keep this between us, and like don't tell anyone, you could go ahead and tell them, but if you don't mind don't tell them.If you want me to explain what exactly happened last year with that thing z told you, just let me know. I also understand if you don't wanna talk, or if you block me, but at least you know that I am sorry, for what I've done, and I hope that it won't happen again.

mohammad93

Ok heres a tip for all of you basement dwellers out there tell a girl something like this face to face or call her because it will show you have more character and that you really are sorry and not just hidding behind your computer.