im inspired to write my first novel tell me what you think

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#1 bluemistake2
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well anyway theres a group of friends which known each other for a long time wont go into much detail.

but one of the friends start acting stange and different in a bad way hes not there you know creepy stuff and theres a monster that calls people gives them a task what they dont know its near impossible and that it kills them a little later than later in the story they find out that one of them has been working with the monster becomes it follower as it were and disapear then one of them gets the call one of them gets killed by there ex friend and they all die exept one no wait the friend who betrays goes missing and turns out to work for them no wait the follower and 1 stays alive and he turns out to be a murderer and gets killed then the last one gets killed in an attempt of killing the monster tell me what you think

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#2 domatron23
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Okay you need to be far more lucid and eloquent if you're going to write a novel. Try explaining it again with some punctuation and proper grammar.
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#3 quasheh
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Almost sounds like that one movie that Jensen Ackles was in ages ago. What was it called? I don't remember... but the devil made his friends do stupid crap and they all died.
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#4 quadraleap
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:oSounds awesome! Keep up the good work! :D

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#5 sAndroid17
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:lol: that sounds soo ***** and try some grammar if you are writing a novel:P

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#6 Shadowhawk000
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Yeah..Nice Grammar :P if your going to write a novel remember to edit it properly :P
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#7 TheSystemLord1
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your idea had better be more solid than that. I'm trying to publish a short story right now (30 or so pages) and I have undergone around 11 revisions so far, each time adding more. It isn't just write an account of events that happen...a lot more goes in to successful novels than you realize.
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#8 TheSystemLord1
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Yeah..Nice Grammar :P if your going to write a novel remember to edit it properly :P Shadowhawk000

You're

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#9 mattykovax
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You must have graduated from the Richard Laymon school of hack horror writing,campus located next to William Shatners school of bad acting. And congratulations on finding hackneyed and generic horror theme #983654.