My fantasy story!!!

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#1 atrain4
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THIS IS NOT INTEDED TO BE RACIST! IT'S JUST A FANTASY STORY!

In the year 2018 the US has been nuked by China and only 2.5% of the US population survives! (That's 7.5 million people left.) Sadly but truly there were no African Americans or Asian-Americans left:cry: So, the US went to some parts of Jamaica and Africa to make a new African American race. Some people refused so the US offered each person $50,000 to come live in the US to repopulate and they agreed. They went to China and got some people to join. (THE US NEVER FORCED INDIVISUALS TO COME!) They had let them decide for their own. Slavery was not an option the US wanted to take because they were not like that anymore. So anyways, It's 200 years later (The year 2218 ) and the African- American Race is up to 16 million and the Asian-American race is 12 million. The overall population of the US is now 52 million. Every race in the US is treated with Equality and there are no more issues of racism.,,

Feel free to add on to the story if you want

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#2 The_PirateKing
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~-~How the hell is that a fantasy story?:cry:~-~
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#3 SaintLeonidas
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so they went to china, to get people, the same people who nuked them, and you wouldnt expect any hate or racism towards them?

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#4 atrain4
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~-~How the hell is that a fantasy story?:cry:~-~The_PirateKing

Is the title kind of innapropiate for my story?

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#5 atrain4
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so they went to china, to get people, the same people who nuked them, and you wouldnt expect any hate or racism towards them?

SaintLeonidas

oops, that's one flaw I have in my story.

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#6 Kikouken
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Your story phails on many levels beyond extraordinary belief.
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#7 GIJesse77
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meh, I'm more into more science fictiounus story elements like an alien race interfering with the growth of the new African american race. I'm not much into poitical, altough 1984 was pretty good.
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#8 atrain4
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Your story phails on many levels beyond extraordinary belief. Kikouken

I know :cry:

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#9 megagene
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[QUOTE="SaintLeonidas"]

so they went to china, to get people, the same people who nuked them, and you wouldnt expect any hate or racism towards them?

atrain4

oops, that's one flaw I have in my story.

"one"?

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#10 The_PirateKing
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[QUOTE="The_PirateKing"]~-~How the hell is that a fantasy story?:cry:~-~atrain4

Is the title kind of innapropiate for my story?

~-~Make the Americans elfs, the Chines dwarfs, and the blacks humans. Then, instead of nukes make it some ancient power. (and make it over 9000) Then bamn! It's a fantasy story!^-^ YAY!~-~
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Your story phails on many levels beyond extraordinary belief. Kikouken

Pretty much what I was thinking.

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#12 Conanfan1
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Here's a better one.

One day, the KKK decided to have their biggest rally ever under the pretense of immigration and because there's no better way to hate others than in a big group of ignorance. This rally attracted people from all over the country. It got to be so big that they couldn't fit in the space they had rented out in Arkansas so they decided to move it out to the middle of nowhere. Also none of them had cell phones. Two hours into their congregation, *insert country here* launched a nuclear bomb towards the United States. They all died because of the bomb, and everyone else in the country was saved because they all owned bomb shelters.