my gamespot rap lmao

subzerolord your rap makes me bored
I think I fell asleep and probably snored

I win.

our mean dude at least i tried.....seriously jeez what a critic you areSubZeroLord2007

yeah i guess your right

Needs more Mic Checks and Yo Yo Yos.....Here is a tip...start your rap like this:Yo Yo...Mic check 1 2...*human beat box scratching*...check check 1...yo yo *then proceede into your 1st verse*.....that formula cant miss. If you want to be really cool end the tune with "Word to your mother" or "Straight outa Compton"Legacyoftain

Definitely thats how all the young hipsters start their raps ;)

It's poetry...write is as such. Otherwise it's hard to read, or fit into beats.

eh.. thats hard to read.. try using bars (/) at the end of your lines

and use the enter key..

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no comment.

my gamespot rap lol enjoy and please dont say its sucks cause at least i tried here it goes......

hey my freinds you like videogames? well guess what i gotta site that aint the same

it gonna drive you insane with all them games it called gamespot thats the new drop so here we go

gonna say it all hope you dont fall with all this brawl

so we start it off by making a profile

make it look nice and dont forget tight you wanna get noticed?

track some people and earn friends dude around here it never gonna end!

so now you gotta couple friends what ya gonna do? get to level 2? no not at all its time to telll you

how its done so come on down and sit down son make a forum tell the world whats new but be careful they might sew! video games and anything else hope jesus dont tells well here we go now we at level 3 review them games and make it seem like you the one who made the game gleem good bad and just plain sad you got the remote so get in control its time for you to tell em whats new get on down and say what you think about games so the whole world might be a little of the not so same....well now you heard it all dont fall cause you pretty tall well now go to gamespot and checkout the site and maybe you might take it lite at first it gonna be new but soon you gonna hang with the crew lol well? yeah i know crappy but i just wanted to encourage newbies and go freestyle! lmaoSubZeroLord2007

Tried fixing it. Gave up half way through, these are the most nonsensical rhymes and the weirdest flow I have ever seen. TC, try saying this aloud and tell me how it sounds to you.

Needs to be written out like how a normal song would be.