How about this: A story about a guy. Since this is the 18th century, crime detective work isnt very good and he is sent to jail on false accusations. Frustrated, he kills two gaurds and gets sentenced to death. To make it out of this situation, he kills his cell mate and uses his bones to dig a tunnel for him to escape, however he experiences bad luck when his tunnel collapses, and he is buried alive. During his last moments, a misterious fantasy like element comes and talks to him. The man begs the being to help him, and the being enfuriated, says no. He explains how even if he was innocent at first, he turned into a criminal, and that he must pay for his sins. He will revive as an ugly beast, which is an outcast from the world, and in that life if he doesn't improve his ways, he will suffer the tortures of hell. He wakes up as an ugly creature, sad but ready to do his duty. People find him, and try to hunt him. He must run, and while running he encounters an area of land where a dark lord is plotting to destroy everyone. Blah blah blah, defeats him. The misterious fantasy thing from before comes and says he passes the test, and he turns back into a human. with a new light, he becomes a good sumeritan, however his murderous ways and anger still are in him. After being vconstrained for so long, he finally snaps, going on a massacre. The being comes to kill him, but as a suprise attack, the being is killed by the main character. Now, the world is following apart, it turns out, that was a god, and since he was killed, the new one to take his place is an evil god, wanting to destroy the world. The main character cries as he realizes what he is done, and the evil got tortures him to death.
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