Please listen to this song I wrote and give me some feedback.

I just released a new song called "Almost As Much". Please listen to it and give me some feedback. Here is a link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMHLF6pDZH0

Wack lyrics because I don't know of Jenny Nicholson or that Porgs toy. The sample beat used is great. Shout out to 80's hip-hop.

I didn't really like any of the content of the song at all- but I would recommend this:

From a production standpoint, It seems like your vocals are very disconnected from the rest of the mix. It's not glue-ing together properly. I recommend making some plug-in/FX purchases. Go to Izotope's website and checkout Nectar Elements/DDLY and Ozone. Vocals are the the most important part of the mix and should be treated with a ton of care.

Also: Im not sure what some of the melody is intended to be- you may want to pick up Melodyne as well and tighten up your pitches.

Thats all from me.

Sorry, but that is Pure Crap. I've heard better singers is the public washroom. Dogs assess make better sounds. lol?