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#1 Utd4lyf
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Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change from Hyde to when we he tramples over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

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#2 Slump3317
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I'd say it needs to be restructured completely.
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#3 Utd4lyf
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How do you suggest doing that?
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#4 bloodling
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No punctuation needed, but the sentence isn't clearly written.
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#5 Utd4lyf
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To make it clearly written how would you swap the words around.

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#6 MotherSuperior
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There is no punctuation needed.
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#7 Slump3317
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Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change from Hyde to when we he tramples over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

Utd4lyf

Sorry I misread your sentence...

It sounds ok but its a bit confusing.

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#8 Premier1101
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Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change of Hyde; from trampling over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

Utd4lyf

changed it up for ya

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#9 Utd4lyf
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Thanks for the help.
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#10 MotherSuperior
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[QUOTE="Utd4lyf"]

Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change to Hyde; from trampling over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

Premier1101

changed it up for ya

Wouldn't it be "to Hyde" instead of "of Hyde"? I'm assuming this is from Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.
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#11 Random__Guy
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punctuation only leads to rehabilitation
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#12 Premier1101
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[QUOTE="Premier1101"][QUOTE="Utd4lyf"]

Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change to Hyde; from trampling over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

MotherSuperior

changed it up for ya

Wouldn't it be "to Hyde" instead of "of Hyde"? I'm assuming this is from Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.

I guess i dont remeber who was the bad side....

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#13 MotherSuperior
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[QUOTE="MotherSuperior"][QUOTE="Premier1101"][QUOTE="Utd4lyf"]

Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change to Hyde; from trampling over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

Premier1101

changed it up for ya

Wouldn't it be "to Hyde" instead of "of Hyde"? I'm assuming this is from Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.

I guess i dont remeber who was the bad side....

Mr. Hyde, of course!
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#14 MotherSuperior
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[QUOTE="MotherSuperior"][QUOTE="Premier1101"][QUOTE="Utd4lyf"]

Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change to Hyde; from trampling over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

Premier1101

changed it up for ya

Wouldn't it be "to Hyde" instead of "of Hyde"? I'm assuming this is from Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.

I guess i dont remeber who was the bad side....

Mr. Hyde, of course! :P
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punctuation only leads to rehabilitationRandom__Guy

I must, need, some serious... help than?

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[QUOTE="Premier1101"][QUOTE="MotherSuperior"][QUOTE="Premier1101"][QUOTE="Utd4lyf"]

Is there any punctuation needed here?

We can see a change to Hyde; from trampling over the girl to murdering Sir Danvers Carew.

MotherSuperior

changed it up for ya

Wouldn't it be "to Hyde" instead of "of Hyde"? I'm assuming this is from Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.

I guess i dont remeber who was the bad side....

Mr. Hyde, of course! :P

Dr. Jekyll can be bad