It's 4.5 - 5/10. The nose face is really sticking out at me and it shouldn't be doing that. The one leg looks broken or bent at a really raw angle. Head/hood is too small for the body (in another words, disproportionate). The shading could be so much better.
It's 4.5 - 5/10. The nose face is really sticking out at me and it shouldn't be doing that. The one leg looks broken or bent at a really raw angle. Head/hood is too small for the body (in another words, disproportionate). The shading could be so much better.ayanami_rei
indeed you are right,it needs work,but since i have just got in the habbit of sketching things and im pretty new to the whole thing in total,i have to agree on the points you mentioned thanx man
Ace. I hope you don't mind me commenting on it's flaws. Not flaws actually; as you can do it right now; the nose, it's a little sharper, and the nostrils, minimize them; and darken the areas which need to be darkened, like the inside of the hoody, the corners of the coat thingy ezio wears and that's it. Score? 9.5; sweeeet! Don't mind the above, not trying to discourage you; just trying to push you to the top :)
Ace. I hope you don't mind me commenting on it's flaws. Not flaws actually; as you can do it right now; the nose, it's a little sharper, and the nostrils, minimize them; and darken the areas which need to be darkened, like the inside of the hoody, the corners of the coat thingy ezio wears and that's it. Score? 9.5; sweeeet! Don't mind the above, not trying to discourage you; just trying to push you to the top :)phoenix-serpent
yes you see i have just started the whole thing on sketching thing but i have to mention that i had a background at art and a great base,i need tr move forward in this kind of art because im feeling it is really needed for me,oh and thanks for the great advice on the art work,it needs alot indeed,and i actually like people saying 3 out of 10 ,it is 100% motivation for me:D:P,again thanks for the great advice and for taking time to comment and give feedback.
It's 4.5 - 5/10. The nose face is really sticking out at me and it shouldn't be doing that. The one leg looks broken or bent at a really raw angle. Head/hood is too small for the body (in another words, disproportionate). The shading could be so much better.ayanami_rei
I agree with this guy. I will give you 5 out of 10 because it looks like you know what you are doing for the most part so I will give you honest feedback instead of giving the sketch a high rating to make you feel better. Keep working on it and post an update.
The anatomy is wrong, the proportion is off, the way the clothes hang is wrong, the shadows are coming from a whole bunch of directions that can't be replicated in life ever.
The anatomy is wrong, the proportion is off, the way the clothes hang is wrong, the shadows are coming from a whole bunch of directions that can't be replicated in life ever.
It's there, that's the best thing I can say
Jaysonguy
thanks indeed you are right,i have to agreee with you because im not a pro at the sketch but im gonna be soon!
The anatomy is wrong, the proportion is off, the way the clothes hang is wrong, the shadows are coming from a whole bunch of directions that can't be replicated in life ever.
It's there, that's the best thing I can say
M3ran
thanks indeed you are right,i have to agreee with you because im not a pro at the sketch but im gonna be soon!
A good idea would be to get an anatomy book (or look up one online) and start getting down the actual form of a person because even if you plan on doing your own exaggerated style you need the basics as a jumping off point.
Learn basic anatomy and then keep on adding until you get the style that feels comfortable as your own
[QUOTE="jman1553"]Better than I can do. (By a million) 8/10 Also, 1: His name is Ezio, not Ezzio 2: You drew Altair. 3: Flip the image horizontally. really?thnx alot,but ezio is spelled ezio is wrong like pizza,you write pizza by you read pitza,thats why there is a double z here,i think,no its not its ezzio in the costumeof altair
[QUOTE="M3ran"] really?thnx alot,but ezio is spelled ezio is wrong like pizza,you write pizza by you read pitza,thats why there is a double z here,i think,no its not its ezzio in the costumeof altair Uh, no. It's spelled Ezio. His name is Ezio Auditore da Firenze. It's best to make sure you know how to spell the name of the character you're drawing.
The rating I give is time dependent. The detail and hashing is pretty good. The face is kind of weird. If this was a quick, 10-minute drawing, I'd give it a 9/10. If this took you 5 hours, I'd give it a 3/10.
The rating I give is time dependent. The detail and hashing is pretty good. The face is kind of weird. If this was a quick, 10-minute drawing, I'd give it a 9/10. If this took you 5 hours, I'd give it a 3/10.cd_rom
it took alot less than an hour,its completly quick sketch
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