Should I Write A Novel ?

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#1 kingfire11
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I've got an idea for a long time now,

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My novel will be about a teenage boy who is 17-18, after his father died painfully, his life has completely changed, he had to work so much time, he lost the ability to sleep and hadn't slept for 3 months straight.

He starts seeing a girl, a weird one, really dark person, she turns out to be a ghost, but this ghost is very human-like, (I mean she doesn't do all the spooky **** we see in movies, but she still has some "ghostly" ablities, I've decide yet what those ablities are), she "the ghost" leads him to do some serious murders (I didn't decide yet why).

the best part for me is everybody around our little hero thinks that he's just imagining a ghost/girl since he hasn't slept for 3 months and so he's so **** up. Even he starts to believe that, but at the end he actually realize he has been in love with a ghost.

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So would this idea work? is it good?

P.S: I'm only doing this for fun and for testing my writing skills. I don't intend to sell this thing.

What do you think?

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#2 guitar_addict
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Sounds a lot like the Machinist movie with Christian Bale.

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#3 rgd51
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no, its too sad, no one would wanna read a book where you want a character to fall in love and then realize that it is a ghost
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#4 JustPlainLucas
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No, you shouldn't write a novel. You should write a how-toguide of how to get your wickets out of your wocket. :|

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He starts seeing a girl, a weird one, really dark personkingfire11

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Unfortunate choice of words there.

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#6 Jekken6
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Go for it, just need to change it a bit to make it seem original

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#7 optiow
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I think it would be a good story to test your writing skills. It may be a bit hard to write though.
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#8 thriteenthmonke
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If you want to then go for it.
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#9 deactivated-5f4694ac412a8
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I've heard stories very similar to this one, but it's hard enough thinking of an original idea. You could take the premise and spin it on its head. I say go for it. Just try to fit in some awesome plot twist. Like, uh, the ghost he fell in love with was a lady the protagonist's father killed and raped when he was drunk in his teenage years. Yeah, something like that.
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#10 kingfire11
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[QUOTE="kingfire11"]He starts seeing a girl, a weird one, really dark personCherokee_Jack

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Unfortunate choice of words there.

English isn't my first language. Sorry about that.

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#11 AAllxxjjnn
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Judging from your post I don't think you can write very well. You'll have to work on that before you write a novel.
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#12 kingfire11
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Judging from your post I don't think you can write very well. You'll have to work on that before you write a novel.AAllxxjjnn
I won't write it in English.
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#13 MistressMinako
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No, you shouldn't write a novel. You should write a how-toguide of how to get your wickets out of your wocket. :|

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You think you can do better? :o

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#14 fidosim
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If you want to make the effort, go for it. Novels are hard to write though. You have to keep track of plot progression, settings, character development, dialogue, etc. It's not just about saying "This happened, then that happened.".
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#15 Cerebris
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Too many vulgarities, which means you're very bad at formulating ideas and sentences in an intellectual manner.


Plus, it's pretty bland, and generic... the question is WOULD you buy a book of 300 pages or so that happened to be about this?

If so, the question is would others, and why?

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#16 kingfire11
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If you want to make the effort, go for it. Novels are hard to write though. You have to keep track of plot progression, settings, character development, dialogue, etc. It's not just about saying "This happened, then that happened.".fidosim

Thanks for your advice, I know how hard it's, I've been reading alot of novels lately and it's a really difficult task to write one, but after all it's just a hobby for fun.

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#17 deactivated-5e7f221e304c9
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The idea works, but it seems a bit cliched.
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#18 VENOM192
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Go for it. ;)

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#19 omfg_its_dally
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Your main character would be a ghost if he stayed up for 3 months without sleeping, 1 month is a little more realistic. EDIT: Actually now that I research it the record seems to be 11 days, so half a month seems a little more realistic and your main character would get to be in the Guinness Book of World Records.
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#20 Deathxcore
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An idea is only an idea, the execution of the idea is what really matters. If you can write a novel, I'd say do it. God speed
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Sounds lame, but it's your story and you said you weren't trying to sell it or anything.
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I've got an idea for a long time now,

===================================================

My novel will be about a teenage boy who is 17-18, after his father died painfully, his life has completely changed, he had to work so much time, he lost the ability to sleep and hadn't slept for 3 months straight.

He starts seeing a girl, a weird one, really dark person, she turns out to be a ghost, but this ghost is very human-like, (I mean she doesn't do all the spooky **** we see in movies, but she still has some "ghostly" ablities, I've decide yet what those ablities are), she "the ghost" leads him to do some serious murders (I didn't decide yet why).

the best part for me is everybody around our little hero thinks that he's just imagining a ghost/girl since he hasn't slept for 3 months and so he's so **** up. Even he starts to believe that, but at the end he actually realize he has been in love with a ghost.

====================================================

So would this idea work? is it good?

P.S: I'm only doing this for fun and for testing my writing skills. I don't intend to sell this thing.

What do you think?

kingfire11

The plot sounds very contrived. If you want it to be a success on the world literay stage (as opposed to teenage niche cult circles), focus on plausible content, do not over emphasise common cliches or make it overtly "moral", but first and foremost, focus on a unique literay style, which can be full of subtle loaded irony or sarcasm, or take a similar approach which throws the tired literary reviewer for a loop, but which does not wreak of convention or formulaic twists. Scifi is cool, but in the "hard scifi" context, and not in the "space opera" context.

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#23 kingfire11
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Thanks for the advice guys, I'll try to think about something more original, it's pretty impossible to be creative!
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#24 PrincessMorte
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Go for it:D I wanna write a novel too but that's when I go and finish college.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBk1yypLfw4

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#26 jazzkrotch
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It's not impossible, just off the beaten path and with a certain amount of unique insight into the subject matter...

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I've got an idea for a long time now,

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My novel will be about a teenage boy who is 17-18, after his father died painfully, his life has completely changed, he had to work so much time, he lost the ability to sleep and hadn't slept for 3 months straight.

He starts seeing a girl, a weird one, really dark person, she turns out to be a ghost, but this ghost is very human-like, (I mean she doesn't do all the spooky **** we see in movies, but she still has some "ghostly" ablities, I've decide yet what those ablities are), she "the ghost" leads him to do some serious murders (I didn't decide yet why).

the best part for me is everybody around our little hero thinks that he's just imagining a ghost/girl since he hasn't slept for 3 months and so he's so **** up. Even he starts to believe that, but at the end he actually realize he has been in love with a ghost.

====================================================

So would this idea work? is it good?

P.S: I'm only doing this for fun and for testing my writing skills. I don't intend to sell this thing.

What do you think?

kingfire11
I wouldn't mind reading something like that.
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#28 rgd51
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this proposed story should not be written into a novel, i certainly dont wanna read about someone happily falling in love and finding out it wasnt real.
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Fiction is and always will be a subjective art form. Some people love one writer and no others ... some people like anything they read. Some like only cyber-punk spaghetti-western vampire detective stories, and some like anything with a beginning, middle and end.

If you want to write: write.

If you want to hone your skills so people will appreciate your work, so that you may get published, maybe in the hopes of landing that national bestseller that nabs you a few mill., then you need to write A LOT.

Anything: short stories, novellas, novels, freakin epic poems. Use one bad idea after another as a strap to your blade, abrasing down the dull edge of inexperience. You have to learn how to FORM a novel. Sometimes it just all flows out of you like water out a spout and sometimes you have to piece it together like a jigsaw puzzle.

It takes even professional fiction writers a long time (sometimes years) to finish a novel (start with short stories) because they are always tweaking and editing and arcing plot lines and changing character nuances. There is also the matter of typeface, line-spacing, justification, story mapping, section/chapter/part placements, backstory (things that a story alludes to that has happened in the "past" before the current events of the story), foreshadowing, conflict/resolution, comedy, ect., ect., ect.

Just because it's a ghost story that some may say sounds a lot like another story/movie that used a similar plot-device, don't feel like your idea isn't original or worth trying out. If you write this story it may become the best ghost story ever written ... it might also become the WORST ghost story ever.

Beowulf, The Odyssey, Hamlet, Grapes of Wrath, Les Miserables, War and Peace, Great Expectations, The Sound and the Fury, Huckleberry Finn, For Whom the Bell Tolls, Slaughterhouse 5, Animal Farm, 1984, Catcher in the Rye, Atlas Shrugged, The Stand, Interview With The Vampire, Harry Potter ...

What do all these stories have in common? They were all read by A LOT of people. Some are considered to be the best literary works in history. Some were just FUN to read. They all provide a good story and are WELL WRITTEN!!!

Take this piece of advice that I use a lot. This is a quote from Ernest Hemmingway:

"If a writer knows enough about what he is writing about, he may omit things that he knows. The dignity of movement of an iceberg is due to only one ninth of it being above water."

Sometimes writting a story is a lot like an impromptu jazz solo: It's not only the notes one chooses to play but also the ones that are choosen to not play.

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#30 noxboxlive
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write it...put it on www.fanfiction.net/ (take's 3 day after you sign up) and see what people think of it.
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#31 nf1994
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Yeah. lol as long as you send me a finished version. Sounds like the basis of a good story.

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#32 AirGuitarist87
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If it's for fun then go for it. Not sleeping for 3 months is too unbelievable though, the most any (healthy) person's gone is a few days. After 2-3 days of no sleep you enter a stage similar to being drunk. 2 weeks or more and you'll be dead. The only way you can go further without sleep is if you have a physical deformity within the brain.