So I'm making a comic and need some thoughts on it so far...

Thoughts?

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I am just a number theme is overused...and cant u draw yourself why are u using halo images?SOTE

Because I'm doing a different take on Halo 3.

Sounds like an emo Max Payne. Edit : Found a mistake.In the third page,it should be "However...they gave up on me before I did on them.Harshvardhan666

Ok, thanks.

It didn't really entertain me....LJS9502_basic

What if it were wearing a funny hat?

I enjoyed it, I was expecting something a lot worse since it was Halo but the narration was pretty good.

But the quality of the last pic made everything a little anti-climatic... the fuzziness didn't give the words the desired effect.

[QUOTE="LJS9502_basic"]It didn't really entertain me....megagene

What if it were wearing a funny hat?

Improve the text boxes. For longer passages break up sections and avoid just placing them at the top/bottom, there's plenty of extra space to use.

Also, contrast is your friend, some photo-manip to sharpen areas of focus would make it a lot easier to read.

Boring. Needs more excitement.

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Needs originality in all aspects and the panels need to be laid out in a comic format, such as seperating each panel with black or some other color along with a border of the same color. Needs a lot of work. Drawing it or rendering it would be a good start.