Aside from the goey hands all of these are works in progress, so I would like any suggestions on what I can do.
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Aside from the goey hands all of these are works in progress, so I would like any suggestions on what I can do.
Thank you.8/10. They are quite good.
Pirate700
Will do. Or at least attemptI think you have a pretty good perception of character form. You should definitely take them to the next level and add a lot of value to them.
Nerd_Man
There's something... off... about the head in this second one. Her face is a bit crooked, and the poor girl's neck must be broken to turn that far.
The right arm doesn't seem to connect to her shoulder, and the left appears to be a good deal longer. It also doesn't seem to be attached.
The front leg is good, the back one is kind of bewildering in both perspective and proportion.
I can't really tell what's going on in the third one. Better picture/ scan?
I like the gooey hands, though. The last one is fine as well.
Bio_Spark
Well, right now I don't have enough time to make major changes to that drawing, but I'm working on a similar full body image right now. I'll try to keep your sugesstions in mind.
The third one was more of an experiment. I try to incoporate one of my friend's and his interests into a drawing. Here's a better pic of it.
The first one is your best one. You have ways to go, but it's a great start. Chiaroscuro my friend, chiaroscuro.
I love that first one.9/10
The rest are fairly good and I think they will be great once they are finished. 7/10
6/10. you gotta add more shading and details.Arctic_GrillzNot necessarily, that would depend on what he's trying to achieve.
The TC said they are works in progress...DEVILinIRONYeah, pretty much.
I have taken all of your posts to heart. And I will keep them in mind in future endeavors
[QUOTE="Mu5uk0"]You need to do a LOT of work on anatomy and shading.mindstormThat depends upon his intention. If he's trying to be realistically proportionate, then yes he does need help with anatomy. If he's trying to be more stylistic but understands anatomy, he's fine. Even stylistically they have to flow. Learning about anatomy does just mean being able to draw a perfectly proportioned human from your mind - it allows you to use the fundamental structure of the human form to create a stylized figure. If you want an example, look at Picasso.
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