The 21st century

Hey gamespot!

Me and my friend the other day were working on a new rap song (we record our own songs for fun with music). We then decided to express our views on the 21st century and how it went wrong in some way. Please feel free to coment this in annyway you want. I just wanted to show yu guys what we wrote. Normally my friend rap's it but this time we just put our lyrics.

21st

Aint we in a all new century

Why is we still dealing with all this damn poverty

Every human beingz got dis feelin

Deep down, and it aint really healin

But when you stop and think clearly

And look at our society

Would be able to tell

And realize its like hell

So Lets combine our differenciz

Instaid of always wanting to change hiz

Plus we got war on our mind

And most of us are blind

Due to the fact

That we don't give a crap

No need to aks yo parents

To make a difference

Cuz dis iz what the 21st century should be all about

Stand Out

Peace

-Written by Oliver M. and Wasem K.

you can't rhyme out with out, what kind of horrible rap is this, stop it, just stop now :evil:

EDIT: I see you took out the out at the end of peace, but the entire thing still doesn't rhyme, and the last part just doesn't make sense

you can't rhyme out with out, what kind of horrible rap is this, stop it, just stop now :evil:ConManWithGun

I agree, the whole thing made me cringe. :|

The 21st century is alot better off then many others, atleast as long as another WW dosen't happen.Guiltfeeder566

I never said this century was the worst , we just mean wars shouldnt happen annymore