Things Happen (FUNNY)

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#1 Wolf-avatar
Member since 2007 • 7783 Posts

Hey Im working on a new comic named Things Happen.These Sprites are custom edits,Anyway heres the first strip.

Comic1AllenBeware.png Things Happen Episode 1 picture by wolfavatar_2008

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#2 mattyftm
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Apart from not being funny, yeah its good.
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#3 BurningChimaera
Member since 2007 • 1255 Posts

IMO, it wasn't very funny and the spelling is bad. Sorry for being so blunt, but that's how I am.

Looks nice, though.

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#4 DeeJayInphinity
Member since 2004 • 13415 Posts
Nothing happened and there's no funneh there.. spend more time on the story and less on the art.
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#5 thriteenthmonke
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Thread title is misleading.
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#6 skinnypete91
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It was so unfunny I actually I laughed at the idea of someone finding it funny.
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#7 DJ-Lafleur
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Well...it looks good. :|
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#8 brendandick
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I didn't find it funny, sorry.
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#10 PlasmaBeam44
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That wasn't funny at all, but it does look good.
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#11 dissonantblack
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sorry dude but there are no lols.
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#12 DEATH_GODX
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is it supposed to be funny or just look pretty?
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#13 PsychoRedFox666
Member since 2007 • 2081 Posts

Well, the reverse color looks cool.

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#14 biBLioTek
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story wise i dont know, need more before i can say anything. drawing wise... no emotions at all, at least pretty hard to see since the character(s) are so small.
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#15 LJS9502_basic
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Artistically nice....but funny not.

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#16 biBLioTek
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story wise i dont know, need more before i can say anything. drawing wise... no emotions at all, at least pretty hard to see since the character(s) are so small. biBLioTek
EDIT: did you draw the background? if so, freakin awesome job there
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#17 dissonantblack
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[QUOTE="biBLioTek"]story wise i dont know, need more before i can say anything. drawing wise... no emotions at all, at least pretty hard to see since the character(s) are so small. biBLioTek
EDIT: did you draw the background? if so, freakin awesome job there

he didn't. the background is from Metal slug.

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#18 Psychosisrain
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It was so unfunny I actually I laughed at the idea of someone finding it funny.skinnypete91

I lauged at how unfunny it was

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#20 mattyftm
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It might be funnier if the guy loses his leggs when the explosion goes off, and then says the "please let it be a good thing" line. But then I'm not exactly a comic genious myself.
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#21 forgot_it
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Really nice backgrounds, decent character sprite, semi decent speech bubble, bad joke.
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#22 Wolf-avatar
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Really nice backgrounds, decent character sprite, semi decent speech bubble, bad joke.forgot_it

Thanks but the things I want my comic to be is

1.Funny

2.good looking

3.good story.

It may now of been funny but the others will.

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#23 NSR34GTR
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its...not funny
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#24 Wolf-avatar
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its...not funnyNSR34GTR

Did you think it was good?

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#25 Big_player
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Was there even a joke in there:?
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#26 Godly_Cure
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I'm sorry but it wasn't funny dude.
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#27 pinneyapple
Member since 2005 • 5566 Posts

OK, so you made non funny text and ripped background graphics from Metal Slug?

:|

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#28 wizard90
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its very cute though
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#29 Wolf-avatar
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its very cute thoughwizard90

Thanks???Anyway I dont care if its not funny just aslong as you guys think there good.

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#30 -Shooter-
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Learn how to spell first >_>
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#31 legend26
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it looks nice but there was no funny
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#32 Wolf-avatar
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Learn how to spell first >_>-Shooter-

What words are mispelled?

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#33 skinnypete91
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[QUOTE="-Shooter-"]Learn how to spell first >_>Wolf-avatar

What words are mispelled?

"swarn" = sworn?

"golf" = gulf?

"were" = where?

"relly" = really?

"are" = or?