Here is an example of what I think you could've added to the start of the video, I was a little vague earlier: "A major theme in the Age of Extinction trailer is that the Autobots have a new human companion/protagonist played by Mark Walhburg. Shia Lebeouf is nowhere to be found in the trailer. I will not be discussing this in detail, because A) there is not too much info on the matter, besides what you can see in the full trailer yourselves and B) I am more interested in discussing the Transformers themselves."
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After watching the full trailer, after being moved to do so, by your initial OP it seems like introducing Walhburg was one of the major ideas of the Trailer, and you don't mention it. I think your entire video would've made even more sense in the first watch if the main idea or one of the main ideas of the trailer would've been addressed. My opinion anyway, I think it would've made the rest of your video and ideas more smooth for the first watch if you addressed the main idea of the trailer. This way you target a broader market,imo; your way, it seems to me, you are leaning towards targeting people who already know a lot of the new Transformers and follow the new Transformers, instead of trying to target everyone, casuals, who may not know a lot of the Transformers or new movies.
Just what I am thinking. I am going to look up more of your videos because I enjoyed this one. Watched this/your video 3 times now. Could be my opinion changes of your video if I watch it a couple more times. I actually didn't mind you dressed casually, offcourse I usually do as well. I also didn't have a problem with the sound I don't think, but I am not too finiky. I use to shoot my videos for class on a Nikon Coolpix 8100, so that had even worse sound. Gaza isn't wrong though.
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Your review gets better the more I watch it. The sound is fine, I have heard so much worse, but yeah if you want to be super-professional it could use some improvement in equipment Gaza was right, just noticed it after the 4th time. Loved the movie pictures on the left wall, and like I said earlier I thought your editing was really good.
Wow, your video is next to impossible to find on youtube. You should pm your youtube name, so I can see your other work.
I think it is great that you have this as a hobby.
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