Wrote my first gangsta rap. What do you guys think? *WARNING. Full of satire*

So a few days ago was my bday. A whole bunch of my friends (about 10 or so) wished me a happy bday on facebook and I decided to write them a rap to show them how much I appreciate their kinds thoughts.

Watch it here:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=JybU62Z3bqk

EDIT: PEOPLE! First of all...I'm not trying to be serious in this rap. It's supposed to be a satirical rap. A funny because it's true kinda rap. Why would you guys think i was seriously rapping with lyrics like "So maybe it's time to end this rap, so that I can go back to fap fap fap" ??? COME ON PEOPLE!

well.... you get an A for effort!! :)auron_16

I shed a tear from laughter. majadamus

Thank you. Someone who didn't actually take it seriously and understood my intentions for writing it.

[QUOTE="auron_16"]well.... you get an A for effort!! :)karriston

Oh man, that's pure awesomeness. Bravo.

[QUOTE="auron_16"]well.... you get an A for effort!! :)karriston

If you want my honest opinion, that was not good at all. It sounds like something that written in about 10 minutes.FragStains

lol to be honest with you, I got a macbook for christmas and I've been playing around with garageband. The song, indeed, was written in a short amount of time (about half an hour) but the melody took me a few hours to figure out.

It is **** Samwel_X