Need Some Feedback

Guys, i was trying hard to make this review, i think it is the best i made till today. My english skills aren't that much but i guess i kinda tryed. Can you give me some feedback, and tell me what you think, what to improve and stuff .

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I just noticed that when you used the word "more", you always capitalized it (at least quite a bit). looks good though.

less "more" and no capitalizing "more"

Noted. what else =) ?

The only other thing is commas. This is a really big problem even in america and other english speaking countries, so no big deal.

use commas when you list things or when you make a break in a sentence to add information. Kind of like parentheses.

One last thing, im not a english teacher so this is just my advice. Take it lightly as I may be wrong :)