Can't rhyme a word with the same word. This poem is crappy even by poetic standards. You use slang, you use meaningless identifies like it. You also use simple descriptive words. Sorry but this poem gets a 1/10.
Can't rhyme a word with the same word. This poem is crappy even by poetic standards. You use slang, you use meaningless identifies like it. You also use simple descriptive words. Sorry but this poem gets a 1/10.
You can use slang in poems, poems are "optimized" for that person to say what they want in any format.
[QUOTE="Marth6781"][QUOTE="horrowhip"][QUOTE="Marth6781"]You can use slang in poems, poems are "optimized" for that person to say what they want in any format.
mismajor99
true... His poem still sucks poetically though.
very true though, i was line OMGWTFLOLS this sucks, i was expecting a 14 line sonnet.
lol..same here, give us at least something mildly entertaining, some of us are boozed up right now :P
Yay! Crappy poems night! I have a crappy poem too. :)
You're full of sh1t just another prick why don't you quit and go eat a dick
You're not even a gamer just a sad flamer it's a no brainer we know you're a lamer
Go play your Wii and Halo 3 in 600p cause you see we actually have HD
So wipe your drool you console fool you're just a tool and PC is cool
EntwineX
Clever, though it's too harsh to represent my personal views. Anyway, the only time PC gaming sucked was in the 1980s. CGA and PC speaker beeps and bloops FTL. Took until 1988-1990 to catch up to far superior computers like the Amiga, though things really picked up past that point.
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