An old sig I never posted for critique

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#1 anihimz
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Okay so in the last tournament for the semi-finals, I entered this sig f5af0d2418474674e23d64f0475133a8-d4r03sg and I obviously got voted out lol Since this was a completely experimental sig, I didn't want to post it for critique earlier but looking back at this, I kinda want to improve on this style I know I didn't execute this properly, so maybe if you guys can tell me what's wrong, I can pull it off better next time
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#2 Mr_Jenkins
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I feel like if your focal was in color this would have worked a lot better. Right now I'm more inclined to look at those bright bits of color than him.
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#3 Pain9000000
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I agree with the focal point being in color.

I am also a little concerned with the lines in the white parts of the sig. Maybe something other than lines? like maybe some type of brush, but I like that you were trying to contrast the white with the color. It has alot of potential :)

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#4 HybridKing
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The effects stand out more than the focal, make that guy stand out more, other than that though I kinda like it
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#5 Jas0n94
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I love it exactly how it is. It is so stylish imo.
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#6 Mr_Jenkins
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Oh, I'd also like to say that I like this more out of the context of the tournament. I remember in this round, you and Helldeep both had white areas with wireframes, but his was far larger. Along with me having a large piece, this seemed very small and perhaps less cool because of it.
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