I like the flow.  Although there is more lighting on the right, I'm drawn to the focal.  The text could be a bit better, but I really like the placement.  I think it might be a  bit grainy on those lines though.
i know very well i couldnt do this if i spent a week on it, but i must say that it would be nice for all (or at least most) of the lines on the left side to lead to the left. it just gets messy on the furthest left quadrant (divided horizontally into fourths) and could use a little more flow.
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