My comeback sig (army of two)

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#1 Plartus
Member since 2008 • 905 Posts

Putting some new work up im a little rusty.

 V1

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V2

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B&W version

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Ratings and comments always appreciated> thanks

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#2 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts

Seems nice, I like the V1 the best (V2=no way). It has nice compo and colors but the stripes next to the guy should go to other direction so the flow will be perfect, but that's not a serious problem. The text is an issue: you have a great sig there but the simple text kinda ruins it. If I were you I would use another font and keep it close to the render.

Keep up the  good job 8)

PS: I love your sig, SPAWN FTW!!! :o

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#3 Dudersaper
Member since 2007 • 32952 Posts

Text is bad, use diff fon't and don't angle it, and keep it close to the focal.

V1 is the best imo, but anyway I'm not feeling that C4D and those stripes.

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#4 Plartus
Member since 2008 • 905 Posts
Thanks for the comments guys text has always been my downfall.. and i made that spawn sig agggess ago before my system got wiped and i lost all my renders,C4d's.stocks etc.... yes it sucked (but at least all my stuff was still in photobucket)
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#5 SnowmanU360
Member since 2007 • 7715 Posts

I like V2 the best.

Everything stands out very well.  I also really do like that color gradient in the back, looks good;) Only thing is maybe sharpen it a bit and add a low Gradient Map to make seem not so....soft I guess:P

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#6 BrunoBRS
Member since 2005 • 74156 Posts

do this:

pick V2 and V2 B&W.

put the B&W one in front and reduce transparency. A LOT.

post again.

i'm not sure if it'll look better or not, but i feel it might look good.

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#7 Dudersaper
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It's just going to wash out the colours even more.
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#8 BrunoBRS
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It's just going to wash out the colours even more.Dudersaper
without making it black and white. sometimes it looks good.
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#9 Plartus
Member since 2008 • 905 Posts
Thanks for all the comments guys... i'll try to get the touch-ups done after i finish my entry for SOTW 20
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#10 loggens
Member since 2007 • 1441 Posts

I think V1 is the best..altough the flow thing needs correcting:)

PS:I like ur sig also:D

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#11 jak10
Member since 2006 • 22272 Posts
The 3rd one is cool.