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#1 loggens
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What ya think:)

V2

Dont think i got all the "rust" away but..

 

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#2 Jas0n94
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The purple in the eyes is too saturated.

Replace the BG with an old paper texture.

The effects on her look like rust. I am not really fond of them.

Either make smaller the text or remove it.

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#3 Colmillios
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I think Jason summed it all up. :) But I like your new style that you are trying.
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#4 loggens
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Ok thanks:)i kept the PSD so i see what i can do:)will post an update
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#5 Colmillios
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The updated version does look better then the first one. :)
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#6 Jas0n94
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her eyes are still purple like... something too purple. O.o

and remove the whole BG and replace it with it with this

 

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#7 loggens
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will do:)