trying something new

ok, I made 2 new sigs of the same person using to methods, which unlike most of my other sigs, don't involve c4d's or fractals. Now, if you guys could rate and comment on them seperately, don't compare them with each other ok :) thanks everyone, hope you enjoy

Axel 1:

Axel 2:

Two makes the render stand out better, but your text doesn't look so good, the pen/ paths you are using are looking too dull, use some layer effects.

Otherwise it looks great.

Oh, and sharpen and smudge the render a little.

V2 is decent, text is bad, DON'T SHOVE TEXT AWAY FROM FOCAL! BRING TO NEAR THE FOCAL.

Pentooling is cliché and meh, mono bg.

Other than that, I like the change

first one is really bad... and what's with the pixeljunk things?

the second one is good, but i think another color for the pentooling would be better.

text needs improvement on both. maybe the font of the first on the second one, and find a better position to it.

Looking at the first one I almost to get my eyes burned. But I might liked the square things if they fitted with the flow.

In the second one, the cubism effect was a nice idea but it doesn't really add anything. I agree with Duder about the pentooling. If I were you, I would use some more brushes or smudging.