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#1 Link334
Member since 2007 • 6082 Posts

I think it's better than most of mine, but not as good as the last one.

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#2 Dudersaper
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Dirt look..

Bad colours

Looks LQ in some places.

Text is bad.

That orange C4D/Fractal whatever is meh.

Work on the lighting.

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#3 loggens
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The focal is too small:P
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#4 Azaru32
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hmm maybe if the render was a little bit bigger then it would look better . Just a thought . Its decent though
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#5 Link334
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'Tis a stock. And I'm afraid of LQ on the focal if I make it bigger.
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#6 Dudersaper
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Was the original stock that small?
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#7 Link334
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It was bigger, but it tends to lose quality even if it was huge.

Here

Won't I have to resize all the effects though, meh, if it looks better I don't really care :P

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#8 Link334
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Also, what are some suggestions on colors? I've noticed that is one thing that I usually do bad on :P
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#9 Dudersaper
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Something that doesn't look washes out and like swamp water.

And you could'vr had resized it better.

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#10 Link334
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Better? or no.

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#13 Dudersaper
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No. Try making it B/W and fizzle with contrast.
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#14 BrunoBRS
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just give it better colors and it's fine.
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#15 Link334
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#16 Dudersaper
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Last version is ok.