Select one of the "seven deadly sins", excluding wrath (Meaning choose one of these: lust, gluttony, greed, sloth, envy, or pride). Write a story about an anti-hero afflicted with one of these sins, being "heroic". The sin must be clearly demonstrated, but the actual name of the sin must not be used in the story. It is preferable that the sin be used in a heroic manner, but not necessary.
Very nice Max. I am thoroughly impressed. You still have a horde of spelling errors, and a bit of repetition causing poor grammar, but on the whole, this is much better structurally that the other piece you posted. Content-wise, I love it. Sounds like a WoW F/F slash fan-fic.
Thanx mate. yeah i know about the spelling errors ill fix that for the next piece.
and grammer: well i talk better english then her so you can judge how it goes when she tries to teach grammer. the books just have poor job of making you learn it.
the piece plays in the oblivion universe by the way, just wanted to add that. hey but im happy you liked it :D
the piece plays in the oblivion universe by the way, just wanted to add that. hey but im happy you liked it :D
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Ack! It's from the other game that I'm playing right now. No wonder I got the location confuzzled. As far as grammar is concerned, don't worry about it. Speaking English and writing English are two different things. The first follows no rules of grammar, the second is generally expected to follow all.
Could mean 1 of three things: 1. your F/F slash has opened his eyes to a new, dirtier world of writing, possibly traumatizing his young mind 2. your slash impressed him 3. he's surprised I got the the WoW and Oblivion location names mixed up
[QUOTE="Rintaran"]Could mean 1 of three things: 1. your F/F slash has opened his eyes to a new, dirtier world of writing, possibly traumatizing his young mind 2. your slash impressed him 3. he's surprised I got the the WoW and Oblivion location names mixed up :lol: No sorry, can't say I caught number 3 :roll: never played either game.
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