First of all, this is good. Second, and as a purist when it comes to editorial writing, I'd like to say thank you for actually writing a legitimate piece. Well done.
As far as a critique goes, I really don't have much. This is a sound piece! The only thing I suppose I could recommend would be cutting unnecessary words to get to the point quicker, but without looking at the piece (I can't see it when I'm commenting), I can't give specific examples.
Seriously though, this is well done and I found myself wanting to comment, which is huge in generating an audience through your work. Good job!
Oh, and let me know if you have any specific questions or if I can be of further help.Â
I did like reading this piece, but there were some very important discussions missing. You say that the mic is the way of the future, but what was the past? What is it replacing? Lack of communication, or communicating via text, or using various menus to issue various communications? If you tell me you have seen the future, tell me why it is so different from the past so that I know not only towards what I am moving, but from what I am moving away.
Also, you bring up an idea of mic-optional games, and I'm not exactly sure what you're referring to since a lot of games that utilize mics also have a "mute player" option. If someone is in fact only using a mic to annoy people, often times players can either mute others individually, or an admin on a server can mute the player completely. Basically, this issue has already been resolved, it's just up to the developers to utilize what's already been done. I remember muting individual players all the way back in my TFC (Team Fortress Classic) days, so really, it has been around for a long while.
I enjoyed how you described your ambushing the "elite" player and feeling satisfaction, but I want to read explicitly how the mic helped you achieve this versus how what you are calling conventional methods would have failed, or would have resulted in less satisfaction of achieving that ambush.
The last paragraph was well-written and wrapped up the editorial nicely.
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