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[QUOTE="orrytur"]cause the xbox colo(/u)r is green but in the new xbox the colo(/u)r on the botton of power is blue.TheRFourI added some proofreaders marks to your post. You're welcome. Color can also be spelled colour. Just thought I should point that out :-)
[QUOTE="orrytur"]cause the xbox colo(/u)r is green but in the new xbox the colo(/u)r on the botton of power is blue.TheRFourI added some proofreaders marks to your post. You're welcome.
Your proofreading sucks. Firstly, capitalization hasn't been handled. Secondly, the punctuation is all wrong... "'cause" is a contraction; a few commas in here wouldn't have hurt either. Assuming that the post is a continuation of the thread title, he has used the word "cause" twice. It would be best if the second "cause" were eliminated and a "..." were put before the "the" to indicate that the statement is a continuation of the thread title, rather than assuming that the average forum person can decipher the hidden meaning behind the TC's complete disregard for our native tongue.
In other words, if you're going to correct people's grammar, know what the hell you are doing.
Anyhow, the new Xbox has not been confirmed. The only announcement that would hold any water with me would be one from MS. My best advice is to not worry about it until that comes.
I added some proofreaders marks to your post. You're welcome.[QUOTE="TheRFour"][QUOTE="orrytur"]cause the xbox colo(/u)r is green but in the new xbox the colo(/u)r on the botton of power is blue.Generic_Dude
Your proofreading sucks. Firstly, capitalization hasn't been handled. Secondly, the punctuation is all wrong... "'cause" is a contraction; a few commas in here wouldn't have hurt either. Assuming that the post is a continuation of the thread title, he has used the word "cause" twice. It would be best if the second "cause" were eliminated and a "..." were put before the "the" to indicate that the statement is a continuation of the thread title, rather than assuming that the average forum person can decipher the hidden meaning behind the TC's complete disregard for our native tongue.
In other words, if you're going to correct people's grammar, know what the hell you are doing.
Anyhow, the new Xbox has not been confirmed. The only announcement that would hold any water with me would be one from MS. My best advice is to not worry about it until that comes.
Its a friggin joke. I know how to proofread correctly.[QUOTE="Generic_Dude"]I added some proofreaders marks to your post. You're welcome.[QUOTE="TheRFour"][QUOTE="orrytur"]cause the xbox colo(/u)r is green but in the new xbox the colo(/u)r on the botton of power is blue.TheRFour
Your proofreading sucks. Firstly, capitalization hasn't been handled. Secondly, the punctuation is all wrong... "'cause" is a contraction; a few commas in here wouldn't have hurt either. Assuming that the post is a continuation of the thread title, he has used the word "cause" twice. It would be best if the second "cause" were eliminated and a "..." were put before the "the" to indicate that the statement is a continuation of the thread title, rather than assuming that the average forum person can decipher the hidden meaning behind the TC's complete disregard for our native tongue.
In other words, if you're going to correct people's grammar, know what the hell you are doing.
Anyhow, the new Xbox has not been confirmed. The only announcement that would hold any water with me would be one from MS. My best advice is to not worry about it until that comes.
Its a friggin joke. I know how to proofread correctly. No you dont..[QUOTE="Generic_Dude"]I added some proofreaders marks to your post. You're welcome.[QUOTE="TheRFour"][QUOTE="orrytur"]cause the xbox colo(/u)r is green but in the new xbox the colo(/u)r on the botton of power is blue.TheRFour
Your proofreading sucks. Firstly, capitalization hasn't been handled. Secondly, the punctuation is all wrong... "'cause" is a contraction; a few commas in here wouldn't have hurt either. Assuming that the post is a continuation of the thread title, he has used the word "cause" twice. It would be best if the second "cause" were eliminated and a "..." were put before the "the" to indicate that the statement is a continuation of the thread title, rather than assuming that the average forum person can decipher the hidden meaning behind the TC's complete disregard for our native tongue.
In other words, if you're going to correct people's grammar, know what the hell you are doing.
Anyhow, the new Xbox has not been confirmed. The only announcement that would hold any water with me would be one from MS. My best advice is to not worry about it until that comes.
Its a friggin joke. I know how to proofread correctly.Â
No, you keep doing this. "Cause" used in that context is wrong. It's a contraction for "because," so it should have an apostrophe at the beginning. You should also know "botton" isn't a word, but apparently, the way "colour" is spelled is more important. I've seen this before, you're obsessed with the way "colour" is spelled.
cause the xbox colour is green but in the new xbox the colour on the botton of power is blue.orryturYepp its fake, there will not be any new "black", "Elite" or "zephyr" or wath ever you want to call it. Its just rumors witch have gone over people heads..
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