What do you think about my youtubemovie?

asdid si my youtbe

Didn't watch because it's not embedded.

I've seen worst.

• The narrator's voice needs some time to get used to but it is fine.
• The exclusion of the Sega Genesis and Sega in general is inexcusable (I understand that this isn't supposed to be an exhaustive work, still).
• Your bias towards Nintendo is latent.
• The transition background of a white crumpled paper is...peculiar. I understand the need for a white ground for contrast when superimposing but it feels out of place (perhaps I didn't get the reference, if any).

If I had to rate it I would give it 5/10 for some tidbits at the beginning regarding the early history; plus not being an unmitigated disaster. Actual competency. It had decent flow, didn't stagnate.

@Master_Live: Thanks a lot for the review. I ain't going to protect myself, but I know that I didn't mention any sega-stuff, but did it in purpose. Not because I don't like them, they are really good, but it would take up much time.

Thank you again for reviewing!

@bmanva: I fixed that, just for you sir!

@lassemaja: Off-Topic is not the forum where you advertise your videos. This one is.

@BranKetra: sorry! im new here:)

@lassemaja:Okay. Do be sure to read the Code of Conduct. If you are going to post in a particular forum, there are rules and guidelines for each forum, so make certain to view those for more information.

@BranKetra: i will! thank you!