I got done with chapter one of my new book....its only two pages long but anyways here it is....

                                            August 27,1943

Chapter 1    (Recon)

          The night seemed to be filled with dread as LT johnson heard the bullets and saw the flashes of war.He wounded his leg when a bullet went off on his leg.Johnson limped to a pile of dirt and gravel,as bullets flew by him he remembered his objective."Destroy the anti-aircraft weapons..",johson paused.    The anti-aircraft was just pass a group of infantry,if only he could get past them somehow he'd destroy the thing with ease.Only problem was is that while falling from his parachute his BAR fell off his body.All he had left was his colt.45."Dang MG42's....",johnson cursed."a Potatoe masher geranade landed next to him and he quickly grabed it and flung it back at them.Only wounded one the others kept to their cover..He heard gunfire to the side he ducked,thinging it was meant to hit him.

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                  He looked over the gravel to see captain williams and three other soliders one being larry a medic.He started limping to the captain.the captain held a german officer in his hands speaking to him softly.All of a sudden williams threw the german to the ground and shot him."Son of a gun was no use...",williams said.He turned to johnson with a smile."well,well..thought you wouldn't survive that fall..HA! proves me wroung...Come on lets get that leg fixed.." Williams took him to larry who cleaned and bandaged johnsons wound."change the bandage in 45 minutes, 'k?",larry said in a stressed voice."m'k..",johnson replied. He walked over to the captain who was studying a map. the captain turned around with wide eyes and yelled "DUCK!!" everything turned black to johnson he heard yells of both american and german..he fell over and hit his head hard on a rock...15 minutes later he got up he saw an mp40 and quickly grabbed it. He looked around..everyone was dead. the captain was laying over next to a tree with his eyes wide open and his mouth in a would'be scream..Johnsons vision blurred in and out and so did his counsince..."must...stay...awaak-" johnson fell over again.

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  If you have any suggestions on the stroyline or changes to the chapter above i would appersiate it...