Well, things still haven't lighten up yet. Things are still pretty rough for me. so this is something I wrote for English class. it's not a poem or lyrics for a song. It's simply a paragraph using parallelism. If you don't know what it means, it's phrases and sentences that have similar gramatical form. If you still don't understand, then I'll have some key words underlined and bold so you can look at them and see what it means. BTW, there is more than 1 form of parallelism.

Before I get to it though, I'll tell you about seeing my old friends that I saw on Sunday at my mom's friend's house. the mom and her 2 daughters were the only ones there. the dad and the brother weren't there. Anyway, OMG how much has changed!! the older daughter actually didn't seem to change that much, but i did see some differences. She is a senior in high school now and she's shorter than me :lol:her hair is red now. I think her hair was blonde a long time ago, but I can't remember if it wasor not (like i said, it's been YEARS since I've seen them). I think shelooks a lot better now though.Now the younger sister... oh, my, gosh... she changedso much :o she's in 7th grade now and still has her blonde hair. She's a lot shyer than she was back then. Back the, she would always want me to do something with her and we would talk, play games, go to the beach, and even play video games (we did all of this at a beach house in North Carolina). It was a lot of fun.Now I found her to beattractive. :o yeah, i was surprised. Actually both sisters were pretty attractive... well... anyway, I was glad to see them again and there are plans to go to North (or South) Carolina next summer (2010) with them and another family that I haven't seen in years also. I can't WAIT for that! :D

Alright. now for the paragraph.

My sadness has been replaced with anger. I have been crushed into a million pieces, smashed with a hammer, punched in the stomach repeatedly, mashed up with mixed emotions, and stepped on with no one caring that they are hurting me. All I can say is, I'm done. I can't take it anymore. They have hurt me way too much to make me care any further. I'm done with them. I'm done...

alright. comments on it are welcome. BTW, I'm not April Fooling you at all. I hate April Fool's Day. It just gives everybody an excuse to torture you in anyway they want and they always expect you to forgive them justbecause it's April Fool's Day.

That's it for this blog. I'll be around!

CRman930