lol the problem I have is afer maybe 30 pages, I lost interest, and maybe take like 2 weeks before writing more...
illegalimigrant
Can you share some of the pages to see your writing style? I have 2 writing styles one is this breif history of a forum I used to post at Stepmaniaonline, approximately in it's 73rd lunar century, or 2008 for ye people, was attempting to rebuild itself after it's vast struggle with Herored. Herored, previously before had been a queer worker, had been given full Administration powers over the area after sucking up to many of the other administrators, saying how dedicated he (Herored) would be to the website. This had upsetted many well known people, including Izzy, one of the oldest and wisest men in the entire Stepmania world. Many had predicted that there would be altercations, but none expected the extreme complications that would result. Through a complete act of hypocracy, Herored began a community of his own, creatively named StepmaniaRed. (Exact date unknown) The developement never got anywhere past a few members. One of the prime members was Bright. Bright was one of the most asinine creatures to exist, with his grammar which resembled a 4 year old's, and his extreme acts of spam. Herored was convinced that his forum would prosper, as his place would see a post about once a day. Bright, in one of his sugared milk rages, was on one of his daily "hyper craze-outs" and deleted all 12 heartfelt posts on StepmaniaRed. Upon discovering this, Herored, being the pyschologically unstable person he was, took out his rage upon SMO. While in a chat session with a fellow SMO resident, Herored set fire to nearly all of Stepmaniaonline. He was only able to do this once he has fully honed and prepared his moderator powers, which had given him control to ignite different objects on command. It is predicted that this was the result of his most supreme ability to fail Quasar, the most known technique ever to be pondered.
Yea I read the plot but I want something that has fantasy but that it can be explainable so as to not give away that something paranormal is going on. I already have the plot figured out so that is not a problem. With my story it starts out with a 23 year old girl named Andrea that has no family and gets an opportunity to find her brother the only family member that she did not see die. She joins the revolution to do this and becomes an important figure in it. However at the end of her journey she must choose to betray the Revolution for her brother or her brother for the Revolution. Weird things happen as part of the fantasy setting. Like I have a character that is always in the front lines of the battlefield and never hurt. He becomes a hero, a eventually a suspected spy. However it seems that his suicidal tendency seem to have no effect on his life as he constantly survives charges into volleys of enemy fire while everyone around him falls. And of course there is many twists. Hm... Has to have a good interrogation scene when she is accused of being a spy. I reccomend she secretly betrays them after she is found innocent of being a spy, because of the anger she had that they would even accuse her. Here and there she helps the other side, nothing that big of a deal, but eventually her betrayals start to effect the outcome of the war, and she loses friends and such... go from there
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