So yeah I've been writing this story for a while and have finally been making good progress on it. I sent the first chapter to my friend back home and he thought it was brilliant, but I feel like I still need a slightly less biased opinion before I move on further. So I was wondering if anyone here would like to read the first chapter as well and tell me how you feel about it? Oh I guess a good idea would be to tell you what its about :P ........ well I'm not too good with summaries :P so just think Heroes with a lot more action but only slightly less drama. Heheh I hope that works :P