Remember WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY back when I said I was making something called Project: Revolution? Well it's here, but I've tweaked it a lot and now here's part one of episode one of Project: Revolution. Let me say right now this is the first time I've actually done one of these, so leave me some tips on what I need to fix. Second, big thanks to Zamxus for allowing me to use some of his characters. So here it is:
Peter: (Black screen) You know the old saying "War is hell?" They were dead wrong. It's Worse!
Screen fades into a battlefield located in Paris, France. Camera pans around to reveal many dead soldiers dressed in dark green and in black. The camera then cuts over into a battle tent where two Official-looking people stand over a map of the battlefield. The first man is dressed like a high-ranking military official with Jet Black hair underneath his hat. A Red scar sits under his right eye, which is black. His left eye is green. The camera moves to a badge on his suit which reads: LHC (Lord High Commander) Zane.
Zane: What's the current status of our situation?
The second man next to him is dressed the exact same way except his hair is blond and his eyes are a steely gray. The badge on his suit reads LCH Nicholas.
Nick: Not good. Word from the field is over half of Predacon's army is gone, but we're basically down to our last divisions.
Zane: I see. This may end terribly for us.
Nick: Not yet. You gotta try to think of something.
Zane: WHAT!? I've never tried to defeat an army that size with so few people. It's impossible!
Nick: It is huh? What happened to that General who defeated a hundred men by himself? What happened to the general who sent the Grand Prediconian army packing with 25 tanks, 1000 men, and a box of ammo? If there's any time to pull a plan out your ass, now's the time!!!!
Zane takes his hat stares down at the map. He stands there for the longest time just looking. Then a streak of blood red hair goes right down the middle of his head. When he looks up, his left eye is also jet black.
Zane: Simple, You take the second and third infantries and head off Xavier and Tuttle's divisions in the southwest sector. I want General Spider to take the 1st and 8th Foot divisions and head off Doomlock in the northern sector. I'll take the Calvary, and the 5th infantry and take down Preadcon and Peter's army at the heart of this field.
??? Are you mad!?
A mysterious figure walks out of the shadowy corners of the tent. A badge on his suit reads Gen Spider.
Spider: You cannot possibly take on Predacon and Peter by yourself. You'll be slaughtered!
Zane: That's a risk I'm willing to take. You know your orders. HEAD OUT!!!
Nick and Spider: Yes Sir!!!!!
All three men head out the tent. On the other side of the field, a tall figure and Peter sit on a cliff overlooking the battlefield. The tall one is not human, but rather cybernetic in appearance. A special armor coves his body, giving him an appearance of wearing a T-Rex as Armor without the head. Peter is about 2 heads smaller than the Tall one and is wearing jet black armor with a cross on the chestplate. His hair is black like Zane's but longer and tied into a long ponytail. A sword sit on his left hip.
Peter: (Narrating) The rebels have become quite a nuisance. Our plans have been halted by them. Now they want our main capitol. Paris. Big mistake.
Predacon: They're planning something Big I feel it.
Peter: Their troops are rallying. This could be bad. You know of Zane's ability to randomly pull off victories with hardly anything.
Predacon: I know, but I got a better plan. Just follow me.
Peter: Alright.
Peter's then sets off a flash. The camera then sees Peter in white Armor, and with short brown hair. A helmet now rests on the ground. He picks it up and puts it on.
Peter: Ready when you are.
Predacon then jumps off the cliff and charges at Zane who has assembled his army. Peter sends out a signal to his army and then he jumps. Peter then Charges at Zane too and draws his sword. He jumps. The camera freezes
Peter: Sometimes, I wonder what would happen if I never found his tomb....................
I hope you enjoyed this. I don't know when part 2 will be up. So keep yourselves tuned in to this channel.
Signing Off 8)