So how has everyone been?? It seems I haven't written a blog in quite a while! I simply haven't been visiting my profile page, therefore haven't seen any of your blogs, let alone write a new one of my own! It seems I have been trying to be a lot more active on the boards, with all of my unions dying, save for the Catz Clan! Organization KH, The Union That Never Was, The Warriors Clan.... all three beginning to die! I am only active in a few select unions, if only for the reason I love my friends there! :D
Oh, one quick note, what do you guys think of my new avatar? It's Roxas! :D I thought it was soooo cute!! Well, it's actually "Chibi" Roxas, but it's so very cute! It's bigger than 80x80, which is the GameSpot avatar size, but it cuts off near perfectly! I quite like it myself.... I found it while looking for an Axel avatar on Google Images, actually.
Before I get to the purpose of this blog, I have been up to a lot of gaming lately! I have started a new file on Kingdom Hearts 2 recently! Slyfur has been helping me along the way, thankfully, because I had forgotten how long it's been since I had first beaten the game! I had virtually no idea what to do! It was quite sad! :lol: So I am somewhere in Olympus Coliseum at the moment, in the Underworld I believe.
Besides KH2, I have been battling Leo in both Super Smash Bros. Brawl and Mario Kart Wii, still! I have gotten much better at Brawl, enough so to beat Leo! But we are both quite even with our Mario Kart skills, so when we race against each other, either one of us always win. I always race as Peach or Daisy, and Leo likes to use Luigi and King Boo. While in Brawl, I useMarth and Link, while Leo uses Meta Knight and Mario. Many times have I tried using Princess Zelda, but I am just not as good!
So onto the purpose of this blog!I've been thinking of starting a story of my own! A short one - nothing with nearly 20+ chapters like Sirracannal's or Mr_Jenkins' stories (and Slyfur's, but she just started a new one, so she's only up to like the 6th chapter. I'm sure there will be much more, however). I haven't been doing that well in Writing class recently, so I was hoping a short story featured in some of my blogs would help a little? You guys could help, too! Slyfur and Mr_Jenkins could give me pointers and such on what to improve, to make it good like their own stories! And the rest of you guys that would like to read could tell me about little parts you liked or didn't like, soI could work on those problems or improve that mark! :D
It would help a lot if you guys would be willing to read and help, for the sake of my grades in school. :P I would be willing to base a character off of you if you're sure to help! I've talked to Slyfur, and she's willing to help me out. And, whether she likes it or not, she's getting a character in my story, too (she's avoided the question each time I've asked), so she'll be known as Squirrel. However, I will most definitely not be writing about myself, like Mr_Jenkins. Though, if no one would like to volunteer to help me, I have two characters planned as backup, not based off of anyone.My story itselfwill be something sort of relating to Kingdom Hearts, if that makes it any more tempting to read. :P
So, here's something I had in mind recently (not relating to the story much, but I did use Slyfur's character and a made-up charcter that won't appear later since she'll be replaced with someone else), please let me know what I should work on in my real story....
Squirrel sighed as she looked into the mirror. Looking back at her with mesmerizing green eyes was a woman with spiky hair, a blood red shirt, and jet black jeans. To her, nothing in life seemed right. She had an "I don't care what you think of me" attitude, which lead people to believe she hated the world. She didn't. She had a tight group of friends she would just about give her life for.
She raced her hand over a scar above her left eye. "That was a bad one...." She whispered to herself, and turned from the mirror. She was referring to a fight she had gotten into the day before, where a gang had decided to jump her as she was walking home alone in the dark. She had managed to outrun them, emerging with only the mark over her left eye from a blade that a blondefemale member of the ganghad pulled on her. "Least I got away." She mumbled to herself, covered the scar with her hair,and headed out the door.
"Squirrel! How are yo- What happened to you!?" Kelly, one of Squirrel's friends,noticed Squirrel's scar, even though it was well hidden. Squirrel began grumbling a reply thatKelly couldn't decode, then realized Squirrel wasn't going to tell her anyway. "Are you okay?" She asked in a soft voice.
"I'm fine. It's nothing.... Just, don't worry about it." Squirrel replied, looking down at her feet. She didn't want her friends to worry about her. "Where's the rest of them?" She spoke up after a moment.
"They're not here yet." Kelly answered. "Why?"
Squirrel shrugged. "Just making sure they're still coming...."
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That little story there isn't relating to the story I plan on writing. I used Slyfur's character description and personality, however. That was just an example of how I plan to write my real story. Feedback is appreciated.
Well.... That's pretty much all I really wanted to say! I don't have much else to blog about at the moment, so if I start my story to improve my writing, that might take up most of my future blogs.
~RikusGirl6~