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My Friend's New Song (Work in Progress)

So, I told my friend he needs to write a bigger variety of songs and he started last night, he says it needs a lot of work, but here it is.

[Chorus]
You don't know Jesus
Not like I do
No
Sent from the Heavens
And we killed him
No, you'll never know[x2]

God's a great father
Sent down his son
Yeah
Then watched him die
As Angels, they cried
(No) You don't know Jesus

[Chorus]
You don't know Jesus
Not like I do
No
Sent from the Heavens
And we killed him
No, you'll never know



This is his first time writing a song like this, and working on it. Usually he'll write one and not work on them. It's just the beginning, but I think he can do it.

And here's a part he I added in.. >____>

[Our live are wasting away
waiting for your so called return
We are held by the word of your book
But how do we know
it's not the work of a crook?

There is no need to accuse,
and no need to abuse
Pointing fingers
will not get us anywhere
but to share a little information
from yours truly
You don't know Jesus
not like I do.]