please read and see if you like my essay so far. if you need to go ahead and give me some constructive criticism. remember i am only a 6th grader.i will also name the parts.

anecdote

    I believe that we don’t need a dress code. I feel it’s a waste for example Ryan was walking home from school one day.  He was trying to be careful because he heard there was a new gang in the neighborhood.  He was wearing his red shirt that was part of  his uniform.  He saw a number of guys on the corner wearing red.  Ryan was found on the ground of that same corner the next day.  He was pronounced dead at the scene.

1st body paragraph 

        A lot of people like to express who they are with the way they dress but with a dress code, they don’t have that type of freedom.  Many children would feel like they can’t be open to who they are.  Also, I feel that if a family has to where certain clothes due to religious beliefs, they should be allowed to, but many dress codes prevent the children from doing so.  School uniforms cost a big amount of money.  The cost of the uniforms may discriminate against low – income families.  Why pay for a uniform that costs a huge amount of money than wear clothes you already own that fit you fine.  As you can see a dress code is clearly not needed.