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#1 Welis
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I do 11Marcel. As long as it is not plagiarism, i have my rights to have somebody helping me correcting some grammars. Not writing a essay to me so i can send it in and make it as my own result.
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#2 Welis
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[QUOTE="darksword1123"]Do your own essay.ATKisNeat

He did?

He was just wanting a critique

Exactly what ATKisNeat said. I am from Norway and when it comes to grammer and vocabulary it can be a difficult task. Other than that, i thank you all for at least giving time to look into it. Thanks Bangel99. And sorry for double posting.

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#3 Welis
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@ Bangel99 - You have earned my respect. I wish i could give you something for this although a cookie is well deserved. I thank you so much for taking your time looking into it. It means a lot to me and hopefully this would eventually teach me how to write better by analyzing what you've edited. Much appreciated and once again thank you so much.
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#4 Welis
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Hey guys. The deadline is for tommorow so i need to ensure if i have done this correctly, check any grammer error if you can please. I am from Norway and i don't know if this is good enough. I'll let you guys judge it. Thank you. =)

(Note: They are censoring life''s.t.y.l.e'' weird.

Short Story Analysis

Synopsis

Themes, Setting, Plot and Characters.

''Thank you Ma'm''

Themes

Thank you M'am's story primarily falls within the urban opera genre and explores themes such as urban life**** redemption and robbery. The story is very common to modern life****in the urban street where poor kids try to snatch purse from defenseless adults.

Setting

Thank you M'am is set in the racism era where the African American lived their life of poor economic life**** According to the author Langston Hughes, this was written around the 1930's where racism were a huge topic in the southern state. Back in that era many African Americans had problem looking for a job or getting job. The time when poverty was needed, and the rubbish society where the black had to fight for their freedom.

Plot

The story begins on a dark night a big black woman (Known as Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones) is walking down the street alone and fearless. The author wanted the readers to know walking in the street alone in that time, if you are black is dangerous. As she wanders in the dark, a white boy ambushed her from behind by snatching her purse. Unfortunately, the purse weighted too much for the boy (Roger) thus then he fell to the ground. The large woman immediately grabbed the boy and then this is how it goes.

As the plot progressing, the woman takes the boy to her house and shows her humble and generous expression to the boy. She treated the boy with utter respect. Roger planned to make his escape although he was too scared to make such hesitation. Mrs. Luella is a spiritual person believing in god. Even the boy did something wrong she still gave him a chance. She even gave him ten dollars to buy himself a blue suede shoes. This is an act of redemption.

And in the end Mrs. Luella released the boy, he wanted to say something unfortunately he didn't and then Mrs. Luella shut the door.

Characters

Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones is one of the first characters to appear in the short story. She is generous, humble, spiritual and passion. Her name comes from the slavery in 1620 era.

Mrs. Luella job is in a hotel beauty shop that stayed open late. She lives in a small house and share rooms with other roomers. She is a spiritual person, when she tells the boy that she did bad things in her life as well, this is how it goes ''I have done things too, which I would not tell you, son – neither tell god, if he didn't already know'' As in general many people make their redemption. So did Mrs. Luella by giving the boy a chance in life and giving him 10 bucks to buy himself a pair blue suede shoes since he wanted it so really bad.

Roger is the second character to appear in the short story. A ruthless boy and very unforgiving. His goal was to snatch a purse from a defenseless woman (which he thought) yet unfortunately he failed. He has to be skinny if he couldn't possess the weight of the purse, even then he got owned by the black large woman. When inside the house, Mrs. Luella went out of sight and the boy had his chance to make his escape. And the purse was lying on the bed, he could snatch it and run away. Thus instead, he stayed. He even tried to ask her if she needed milk he could go to store and buy it. In the end, he couldn't resist to thank Mrs. Luella.

My opinions

The short story was an easy story to read and understand. What I believe is Author Langston Hughes wanted the readers to understand that the African Americans are not vile or low educated. They have emotion, understanding and supportive. I don't know any background story of Mrs. Luella, she has to be married by looking at her name and somehow she was raised during the slavery era by the name she was given. As for the boy he is poor I guess.

I wonder what he was doing so late, where are his parents shouldn't they take care of him or something? Maybe their parents were racist? Or maybe they don't care about him anymore because he is ruthless. Again, he wanted a new pair of shoes, he could just ask Mrs. Luella instead of snatching her purse. Guess he learned his lesson. Nevertheless, I have no more to say about this.

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#5 Welis
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I knew this guy since Kindergarden and we were good friends until on Junior High he admitted he is Bisexual but boys attracted him more. So he got attacked at School (Means not physical but mentaly) and massive spam on his own Website Guestbook. It somehow ruined our friendship but we still get along now today.
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#6 Welis
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I love Underground/Old School HipHop
Such as Wu Tang, DMX, 2Pac, Nas, Gangstarr, Army of Pharaos, Big L, Guru, Dj Premier, Necro, Jeru The Demaja, KMD, MF Doom, KRS-ONE, Immortal Technique, The Roots, Jurassic 5 and many more.

If you can name any similiar to this then i'll be happy. If you name any mainstream then i'll .........!

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#7 Welis
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My dad is a mercenary. (oh yeah, he appears in Mercenaries 2 as an exclusive character for 360)
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#8 Welis
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If you want to join Al-Qaeda.d51man

LMAO!!! Epic Response! Posting on a EPIC THREAD!!!

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#9 Welis
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Rap is my favourite genre for now. I did listen to Techno, Rock and so on. I am a music fan so i love everything related to music.

However, regarding rap music the music we hear on the radio today so called ''Mainstream'' Era sucks badly.
It is no close to Old-School and Underground Rap.

Gangstarr, AZ, Nas, WuTang, Biggie, DMX, Tupac, Last Emperor, Jurassic 5 and Big L those are the guys you hardcore rap fans should go for and i know most of you already done that. :p

Oh, the Chamillionaire song is bad. That is typical Mainstream ****

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#10 Welis
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[QUOTE="shoeman12"][QUOTE="battlefront23"][QUOTE="shoeman12"][QUOTE="battlefront23"]

[QUOTE="shoeman12"]who's dr. dre? battlefront23

*pretends you didn't just say that*

You're awesome Battlefront. OldSchool/UNderground Rap = EPIC
Mainstream = Epic Fail indeed.

Otherwise, R.I.P Son of Dr.Dre

i did just say that, i've never even heard of him.

I'm hoping tha you never EVER listen to rap, right?

nope, i listen to rock.

Alright so you are somewhat redeemed. Him, Tupac, Snoop Dog, and a few other rappers made rap famous. Although modern rap = epic fail.