Have a picture to go with the character thats been in my head most of my life. Also Have a new synopsis.
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I give the picture a 8 accounting for the style used, the solid work of the artist and my whack ass direction.
With this I can tune the art direction of further works and thats one good thing about having a few commissions done as you can see the details and tweak them as needed.
Artist is http://www.ivstudios.net/index.html
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New synopsis=12/18/2008
What is chronicles of the lord of power well let's start with the
foundation of the universe in the beginning there was only darkness a
murky congealed existence that offered nothing but chaotic and random
spurts of existence to form. After time Lightness came forth an ever
growing, progressive, evolutionary existence that expanded the universe and its multiple layers called dimensions.
The Lord of power is the main character a self doubting character
unsure about himself, his powers and his direction but always caught up
in things larger than his comprehension but always winds up seeing to a
end due to his kindness and savant like tenacity. At first he is flung
to a far off world one of medieval themes and magic, his task simple
save the brunt of the world from the encroaching darkness but he is
cast into the world unprotected and is wounded losing not only his
powers but his memories and even his personally.
Within the prologue he is a disenfranchised young man filled with
sorrow at his lot in life as the book starts he is relived of that
sadness for a time able to relearn about himself and learn about his
new found powers. He learns in part the history of the war of creation
and some basic themes of the past like the 5 key elements of power
represented in 5 orbs set in a 4 point star.
Each primary element has a sibling element and each has a sign derived from the path it takes, for instance Blue is the color of good its
element water its sign kindness its righteousness tempered with
humility. Its sibling element is ice its sign stoicism making its path
one of nobility and leadership.
He learns each element has a theme and personality of its own during
these journeys he develops a split personality that shows itself when
he is all but broken upon the rocks of life, they come to him as polar
opposites the personality known merely as Good is stoic, arrogant and
bears the quirky honor of nobility he says "Sternness is noble, it is
not arrogance as others would lead you to believe, I must walk above
all others to walk on the path of nobility and justice.: L.O.P: Pale
Knight". Evil on the other hand and yes that is "its" name is a lust
driven maniac its favorite quote " Darkness is despair and perversion,
I prefer perversion with a taste of madness, either one keeps me from
boredom.:L.O.P: Shade Knight" and the lust that drives him takes its
form in carnage on battlefield it turns to groping and entemperous
wordplay in the bars and around "worthy" females, for all of its talk
of bedside conquest it's not known if he has managed to initiate bed
side carnage for the instant the target of his affections is wooed his
personally snaps back to normal turning most off….severely.
These personalities subside outside of the first book and are later
found in his main weapons the staff of darkness and the sword of light,
but before then he has to find his place in the universe and that's the
start of book 2 where he enters Light Forces the army and governing
body of creation, they find a place for him and grind him into their
ranks to the point he cannot take it anymore and goes awol.
DOL is the Dragon of Light while he has a high rank in Light Forces
he's become displeased with their endless red tape and inaction and
tries to balance the main characters sanity with training him to be a
true warrior of creation. D.O.L himself is a wise yet perverted old
"man" he is after all the culmination of lightness wit and humor, this
with a entertaining green horn it cannot lead to anything but
"entertainment".
Eventually the main character comes to his senses but only after being
stranded, crashed alone on a broken and forgotten world for almost a
century passes when he finally leaves that place hes a bit more sure of
himself and with the assistance of a strange AI becomes a rag tag band
of detective mercenaries doing odd jobs for either Light Forces and
even Dark forces are unwilling or unable to take.
-edited it up a bit 12/20/08
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