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Chapters two part two!  Beware of the night: Nariku's experience!''

 

 

''What?!'' exclaimed Nariku.  ''THAT should be a fraction of what it should be?  Honestly, have you gone mad?''

''No, it's just that I know the strength of Maji, and your previous attack can't even put a scratch on Maji!'' shouted David somberly.

''How the heck would you know how strong Maji's attack is?'' asked Nariku intrigued.

''I fought him with a bunch of my friends,'' replied David seeming extremely sad.

''What happened?''

''I was sent with my friends because we were some of the top fighter in the village.''

''That's horrible!'' replied Nariku collapsing with sympathy.

 ''Yes, but let's continue with the training,'' replied David not wanting to dwell on the thought.''

They continued training, this time Nariku trained vigilantly. 

''Haaaaaaa!'' yelled Nariku as he started running in a circle.  He scraped the ground as he ran making a massive fire.  He continued to run, and soon the fire became taller then the Himalayas.  ''Hell strike oblivion!'' yelled Nariku as he completed the move.  This time, he fire destroyed everything in the battleground, and all Nariku saw was burned metal and trees, as well as a lot of smoke.

''David! David!'' yelled Nariku excitedly. 

''There was no reply.

''David?'' yelled Nariku now scared of what had happened.

''Hahahahahahahahahahaha!''   shouted an unknown voice. 

''Who's there?'' said Nariku drenched in fear as he tried to fidget his way to the exit.  Nariku may have had secret powers, but he was still a boy.  And a scared one, too at that. 

            Nariku bolted towards the door, but it was to no avail.  There were three shadowy figures by the door, all with murderous expressions.  ''Well, well.  Look what we have here.  A little brat.'' Sneered the tallest person.

''Yeah.  So, should we kill him?'' asked another person.

''No!  You know what Maji will do to us if we kill the brat.  He ordered us to bring him to Maji himself.''  Said the last person

''We'll just say that he died while he was escaping,'' said the tallest person menacingly, his hand moving towards his pocket.

''Fine,'' sighed the last person, sitting down with a gleam in his eye.  ''Do it.''

The tallest person, who's name was Highi, sprinted at Nariku, and thrust at him.  Nariku thought that it was an easy move to block because of its speed,  until Highi sent a second punch at Nariku lightning fast.  The punch hit Nariku square in the chin, Nariku fly in the air.

But Highi wasn't down yet.  He jumped in the air, aiming a kick at Nariku's face.  It was blocked, though it left it a big scratch.

''So, that's the best you can do, brat?'' taunted Highi with a superior look in his eye.  ''Well, I bet that you're going to join your friend...in hell!''

''What friend?'' asked Nariku, tension building in his stomach until it almost hurt.

''Oh no one.  Just the guy teaching you a couple minutes back,'' laughed Highi, unaware of the rising anger in Nariku.  

''Die, you scum!'' roared Nariku bolting towards Highi.  He ran scraping the ground as he ran.

''Here's dinner! Fire dragon!'' roared Nariku, unleashing the move.

It failed, just as Nariku collapsed. 

''What's wrong with me?'' thought Nariku.  Pondering, the truth hit him in the face like a bullet.  ''Of course!  I used up too much energy in the move.''  But anger overtook him as he remembered the tragedy that overtook him.  ''Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!'' he yelled.  As he ran towards Highi, he thought, ''If I can do fire moves, I can probably do moves from other elements too.  Taking his anger as his source of power, he did a move that he had never tried before.  The men gasped as they realized the move. 

'Electric hell shocker!'' Nariku yelled.  The move made thousands of volts of electricity, frying the man completely.

''Good, good!'' said the shortest man, Kilia in a menacing voice.  ''You beat the weakest member of Maji.  You should be very proud of yourself.''

''Oh crap,'' thought Nariku, exhausted.

''Hahhahahahhahhhahahahahahahaha! '' shouted Kilia. ''You might be able to beat me: in 1 million years!'' he taunted lying down on the ground.

''What?  Why are you lying on the ground?'' asked Nariku, trying to summon the energy he would need for the fight. 

''I'm facing YOU. I don't have to stand up for this fight.'' Said Kilia laughing.

Nariku gulped.  He was about to face a top-ranked soldier of Maji's. And Nariku himself was exhausted,  meaning that he couldn't use any of his special moves.  ''Haa!'' yelled Kilia from the floor.  He summoned many water needles, all aimed at Nariku.  They hit him dead on all over his body. 

''Uhn!'' cried Nariku out in pain as he was on the ground covered with scratches and blood. 

Nariku ran at Kilia, a knife in his hand.

''This is for David!'' he yelled concentrating all his energy on his blow.  ''Knife water pour!'' 

Nariku threw ten knifes at Kilia with all the energy he could muster.  Kilia blocked them all with apparent ease.

''Is that all, you've got?!'' said Kilia.  ''Well, I guess you're done for.  You can join David!''

Kilia finally got up, and charged at Nariku.  Just, as he was about to launch his attack at Nariku, he sprawled to the ground with a thud.

''Join who, you said?'' growled a familiar voice.  Covered in scratches and bruises, was David.

 

End of chapter two part two! 

Next time, Nariku learns the terrible truth about his family.  Will it be enough to dissuade him from fighting Maji?! End of chapter two will be available next Saturday.  See ya then. 

Hey guys!  It feels great to be back!  I'm sorry that I haven't been on much lately, but i've had to study, and I've been playing outside lately.  I'll be on now a lot more, and part two of chapter two in my novel will be on tonight, so you can look forward to that, too.  see ya later, guys!

 

 

                                                            Chapter Two: For Real: Things get serious! Part one

 

''Relax, Nariku.  Nothing's going to happen to you,'' the mayor said as though Nariku killing someone is an easy task. 

''If nothing's going to happen to me, then why did you call me here, and not someone else?'' Nariku retorted. 

''That's because you have been gifted by the gods by a special power, that could no doubt help our country a lot.''

''I honestly doubt that what you're talking is true.''

''Well I guess that you won't be convinced.  What reward do you want?'' asked the mayor.

Nariku thought and thought about what he could buy with the money.  He thought of all the cool gadgets he could get.  Then he thought about how his mom was miserable with their living conditions.  After thinking, he made his decision.

''I want a big house.'' Nariku said.

''Really?  That's all you want?  Ok, I'll make it happen.  Now let's talk about the points about the mission.''  First of all, I want it a clean kill.  I don't want him to survive.  Second, there is a secret about him, I'm sorry to say but he I-''

''He, he, he.  Who the hell is he?'' interrupted Nariku.

''He is the most famous serial killer in the country.  You know how suddenly had to train for fighting?   He's the reason why.  He's killed too many people.  He must be stopped, and only you can do it.  Now please go home, and come back at this time tomorrow for your training.'' As the mayor finished his talk, and Nariku left, the mayor was thinking,' you can learn the secret about Maji later.  You don't want to hear it, Nariku.''

The day passed, and then came the time for Nariku to go to the mayor's office....

 

''I'm going to the mayor's office mom!'' shouted Nariku.

''Ok, dear.  Be careful!''  she said.

Nariku bolted past the park, heading to the mayor's house.  He opened the door without knocking, and heard voices.

''Do you honestly think that Nariku will find out about Maji's secret?' 

"Maybe, but it's best if he doesn't.  It could kill him.'' Said a voice that sounded like the mayor.  ''Would you like it if your previous best friend turned out to be a serial killer?  No, I don't think so.  So don't tell Nariku, or anyone for that matter.'' 

''Got it mayor.''

Nariku quickly left outside and pondered about what he heard.

''So Maji is Shikya.  I wondered where he had gone.  But do I have the strength to beat him?''

            It Was true: Shikya was better then Nariku in almost everything except for math.  And math can't save someone.  Nariku thought and thought.  Then he knocked on the door.

            ''Oh, hello, Nariku!'' said the mayor.  ''Yes you came at the perfect time for the training.  Here is David.  He'll be your instructor.''

''Hello Nariku,'' said David kindly.

Nariku smiled back.  David seemed like a good person.

''Well, if you're ready, please follow me,'' he said.

They walked to an area that Nariku had never been to.

''This is called the death circle. Many people have met their deaths here training.  Only a few people are allowed to train here.  It is an honor for you, indeed.''

''A training ground where people die?  Doesn't sound like an ''honor'' to me,'' thought Nariku, but he kept his moth shut.

''Ok, now try to do that tornado move yesterday.'' Said David.

''Ok,'' Nariku replied.

He tried and tried, until he finally felt frustration and did it.  The move incarnated every tree near Nariku, and burnt the metal nearby also.

''How was that?'' Nariku gasped.

''That?  I believe that you van do more then that.  THAT should be about a fraction of how powerful it should be.''  Said David grimly.

 

End of part one!  Plz comment!

Next time:  Nariku continues training.  Then one night, he gets jumped by a pair of Maji's goons........

CHAPTER ONE: SECRET WEAPON: Nariku!

 

 

It was another cloudy day in the village of Blitizville.  The clouds were dancing in a bizarre way. 

''Damn it!  We have to kill Maji.  Otherwise, the whole village will go down, as will our country,'' Said a government official.  ''I know, but we've been sending our best men to kill him, but he just won't die,'' replied the mayor of the village.  ''Then, with your permission, I want to make a new law that will force every child over the age of 12 to train to fight. With any luck, in a couple of years, Maji might die by one of them,'' said the government official.  ''All right. Do as you like,'' was the reply.  'The world will see a new age of\peace once again!''

 

10 years later....

''Nariku!  Come on, you'll be late for the training.''  ''All right mom, Nariku replied.  He rushed down to the first floor.  His mom was waiting.  ''Have a nice day,'' she smiled, as Nariku ran outside.  Nariku bolted to the academy of training. Every day, he trained hard, learning all he could.  He wanted revenge for the death f his father.  Lost in his thoughts, Nariku slammed head first into his teacher.  ''Watch where you're going,'' he said coldly.  ''Yes sir,'' Nariku said as he walked past.  When the teacher was out of earshot, Nariku said to himself,' Watch yourself, you damn moron.'' Everyone in the village hated Mr. Kila.  It   was just that he was mean.  Nariku reached class just in time for the lesson.  ''Now that in everyone is here, we'll be begin the lesson.''

            ''Today is going to be a test first hand.  You'll have to fight someone one year ahead of you.  If you land 4 hits on them, you pass.  No one is expected to knock them out because they're the best of next year.  That's all.  Now follow me outside please.''  While they went outside, the class murmured in anxiety because they thought that they might fail.  

''Who wants to go first?'' he asked.  ''I will,'' Nariku replied.  ''Very well. Here is your opponent.  It was a slim, person with many muscles.  ''My name is Ouri.  Prepare to get beaten.''

They started running around each other.  Suddenly, Ouri punched with a right uppercut.  Nariku easily dodged it countering with a kick.  They continued like this: Nariku dodging and counteracting until he got 4 hits in.  ''Ok, Ouri.  You may go harder.'' The teacher said. This time, Ouri disappeared.  He came out of nowhere slamming his leg on Nariku's stomach.  Nariku fell to the ground, tasting fresh blood.  He started to give up as Ouri began a punch, but then he remembered his father's death and got up, dodging the punch.  He ran around and around in a circle until he made a tornado.  The next second, the tornado was full of fire, and it hit Ouri head on.

Everyone was speechless.  Then the mayor came clapping.  ''Well, well.  It looks like we have found the person who can beat Maji.  I request that you come with me.''

                                                                        To be continued....

                                    Next Chapter: Dangerous Mission: The real training begins!

Hello.  I would just like to say that my story Red blade is cancelled, and I'm starting a new novel: Killing Spree

In this story, there is a ninja that is known for killing the most people in the country, and how amny ninja have been sent to kill him, only to never return.  The goverment is getting scared, and is training kids, regardless if they want to, or not.  When training, they find that a boy named Nariku is gifted witha secret power.  The power to make powerful new jutsu.  They send him after training him for 3 years, and goes on a voyage to kill the evil mastermind, and his minions.  WHile going on the journey, nariku learns a teriible secret about the identity of the powerful ninja.  Well, that's the summary of the story.  Stay tuned to read chapter one, and fell free to sya that it's good or bad.  THat's it for now, and see ya.  Hope you have a wonderful day!

Finally!  Next up:1000!  Well, I finally beat Zelda, and I have to say, the last fight with ganondorlf was easy.  I mean come on, he got distracted by my fishing rod!  Well,I'm going to buy SpM  next, it looks good.  And for anyone who reads my novel:Red Blade, the next chapter is going to premire on tuesday, I'm going to Wisconson Dells tommorow.  Well see ya later!

It's a peacefull day in the fire village.  The sun is shining brightly, and there is no talk of war going on for once. 

''What do you want to do, Arai?'' asked Max.  ''I wanna go back to Japan,'' Arai replied.  ''Why?' asked Max.  ''You want to leave me, your best friend, alone.  You know that I have no other friend.  Besides what does America lack?''  ''It lacks peace, you imbecile.  Every month, there's some fight or the other.  I don't like it.'  ''What are you afraid of?  I'm here for you.  And everybody fears me.''  Arai snorted with laughter.  Max knew perfectly, that he got bullied everyday, and that he feared everybody, instead of everybody fearing him.

  ''Come on, Max, let's go to your house.  They walked to Max's house joking along the way.  But when they came home, they saw that there were soliders leaving the house, their blades stained with blood.  ''No!'' shouted Max, as he bolted inside his house.  There he saw his parents lying in a pool of blood.  They had managed to write two words:  Red Blade.  Max stared at the piece of paper.  Then he swore an oath:'' I swear that I will avenge my parents.  I swear that I will find out the meaning of the red blade.  I WILL avenge them. 

                                                       End of prologue, next chapter:  Time flows 5 years, and Max and Arai are both 13.  They decide the time is now to find out the truth about red blade, and they join the ninja acedemy and train.  There, they find out a deadly secret about Arai....                            Tune in next week, on saterday to read chapter 1

   That game is so good, i've been doing nothing else during spring break and play it.  It's challenging, but that's something i like about games.  As for other games I've been playing, well, I play wii sports a lot, as well as Paper Mario 2.  It might be outdated, but it's still one heck of a game.  Upcoming games that i will buy: super paper mario, super mario galaxy, super smash bros brawl, SLy 3, Jak and Daxter 3, Final fantasy 12, and that's it for now, i'll update my blog in about a week.