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Rate the dialogue which could be in my untitled movie project

MIND THE LANGUAGE PLEASE!

This is two guys driving to a Diner to pick up another guy for a bank robbery. Nathan is driving, Alex is in the passenger seat.

Alex: So.. this guy we're picking up, is a cool headed mother****er, or does he cap grannies like I eat pretzels?
Nathan: He thinks outside the box.
Alex: Huh? The **** you mean he thinks outside the box?
Nathan: He thinks outside the box -- That's what I mean.
Alex: Example.
Nathan: One time he was taking a test, a one question test.
Alex: ****, a one question test. **** I wish it was that easy.
Nathan: Yeah, anyway, he got an A on it.
Alex: How's that thinking outside the box? What was the question?
Nathan: Why?
Alex: The **** you mean why? I want to know *****!
Nathan: No, the question was Why? W-H-Y question mark, end sentence.
Alex: Again, how's that thinking outside the box? He probably put down a 200 mother****ing word essay
Nathan: He put 'Why Not' and got an A. Everyone else was putting down 200 word essays.
Alex: Hey man, that ain't good.
Nathan: Huh? What you mean?
Alex: Say we got the money, and there's 5 hostages and you say 'Kill 'em', like a joke you know. Instead of thinking 'Why kill 'em', he'd think 'Why not?'"
Nathan: Yeah, I could see how that'd be a bad situation, but that's why he's the getaway driver you stupid ****.

And I will dispell the rumor that Nathan and Alex are named after GS administrators. Taken from OT II (copy and paste of course)