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Improving my reviews(updated)

I have posted several reviews on this site. recently i was looking through them and i noticed a theme, people don't tend to recommend my reviews.the problem is my writing i never tend to think about the structure of my games and quite honestly i never give it any thought what so ever.

so i made a pledge, better reviews orno review at all.

so i joined a union the league of reviewersand i asked whats wrong with my reviews and how can i improve them. At this point i would like to say thanks to loopy_101 and lolhahaDEADfor there continued feedback.

and with a little elbow grease and a pen i sat down to write. so here it is my review for DJ Hero. it has been updates since i posted this so if you get a chance have another look :)

please leave whatever feedback you can,its much appreciated doesnt matter how brutal just go ahead and leave it at the bottom of the page and recommend my review if you found it helpful.