I posted this message as a topic in the forum at the Game Reviewer's Legion, but it didn't get to many responses. It is fairly long and please read the reviews.

My first review that I wrote was my NCAA Football review which I wrote before I joined this legion.  It isn't really good (at all), but I won't change it for the purpose that I like to see my progress. http://www.gamespot.com/ps2/sports/ncaafootball2006/player_review.html?id=227417

My second review was my MGS3 Subsistence review.  People really seemed to like this one, but there are many gramatical flaws, and I could have been more detailed. http://www.gamespot.com/ps2/adventure/mgs3subsistence/player_review.html?id=288334

My third review was my Socom 3 review.  It didn't really get much feedback, but besides some from weird wording on my part, I like it a lot. http://www.gamespot.com/ps2/action/socom3/player_review.html?id=305725

My fourth and latest review is my MVP 06 NCAA Baseball review.  It also didn't get much feedback (probably because it is a sports game which doesn't always appeal to everyone) but I put more time into this one than any other review and I think it is good. http://www.gamespot.com/ps2/sports/mvp06ncaabaseball/player_review.html?id=321610

My fifth review is in the making.  I am reviewing Gran Turismo 4, but it will take me a while because I want to be my best review by far because it is a really good game that has so much to it.

All in all, my point of this post was:

1. I want everyone to read my reviews

2. I am not nearly at the point that I want to be as a game reviewer

and most importantly

3. The legion has given me severall tips on what to improve in my reviews, but more importantly it is that I read some of the great reviews by the top reviewers here and it makes me want to get better.

So I just want to thank everyone in the union, especially Oddball for inviting me, starting this union, and getting me interested in writing game reviews.